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(Message started by: sandie99 on Mar 11th, 2004, 5:30am)

Title: Little poem
Post by sandie99 on Mar 11th, 2004, 5:30am
I wrote this on one of my bad days in February...


Too fragile to fly
girl like butterfly
she had her dreams
she followed her wind
but somebody cut her wings

She was too fragile to fly
girl with blue in her eyes
girl like butterfly

She was too young to die
I wish she didn't have to say goodbye
just yet
but off she went
and with her
I lost my best friend

She had open sky
but she wanted to die
She was too fragile to fly
the girl like butterfly


Best wishes & loads of PFdays to everybody!

sandie99

Title: Re: Little poem
Post by thomas on Mar 11th, 2004, 8:29am
It sounds to me, like you lost someone close.  I can feel your anguish in that piece, it was beautiful.

Title: Re: Little poem
Post by KingOfPain on Mar 12th, 2004, 2:08am
Very nice.

You got to me.

Please write more.

Thank you for sharing this.


Steve



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