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(Message started by: athos12 on Nov 12^th, 2003, 1:12am)

Title: I need a critique on a design
Post by athos12 on Nov 12^th, 2003, 1:12am

Let me know what you think...

I have just secured the domain www.xdup.com

There are other ideas of some 3D CH related images that I am working on... When I am in the middle of a CH I deffinately feel XdUP!!!!

http://www.inovion.com/~reality/downloads/xdup.jpg

I am in the process of trademarking it too... hope that protects it... I think that it is cool

Title: Re: I need a critique on a design
Post by Callico_Kid on Nov 12^th, 2003, 1:15am

Looks good to me. That is coming from someone who is artistically challenged. ;;D
jc

Title: Re: I need a critique on a design
Post by athos12 on Nov 12^th, 2003, 1:41am

Define the value of X in any equation and plugin an image of the result of X behind the X to complete the image.

Many many possibilities...

If I can make this fly... Will donate certain percent of proceeds to CH.org

T-Shirts.. Hats.. Keychains... Hell Condoms....

I have the connections to manufacture thousands of products with logos on them.

Title: Re: I need a critique on a design
Post by ZAIRA on Nov 12^th, 2003, 2:19am

I think you are great, as usual.... I like it!

:-* Zaira

Title: Re: I need a critique on a design
Post by brain_cramps on Nov 12^th, 2003, 7:32am

COOL!!! Think you might have a winner there, but I'm another artistically challenged individual. (challenged in a LOT of ways LOL)

grant

Title: Re: I need a critique on a design
Post by athos12 on Nov 13^th, 2003, 3:09pm

I want to do a line of t-shirst etc that say "X" _____ then fill in the blank

Thanks for the input

Title: Re: I need a critique on a design
Post by floridian on Nov 13^th, 2003, 3:18pm

Quote:

I have the connections to manufacture thousands of products with logos on them.

Maybe you've got the next "hello, kitty" ... in Japan, there are thousands of hello kitty products - not just for kids. There is a vodka, and condoms. It's an all purpose brand.

Looks good, but if you want to tweak it, What about adding a little thickness to the upper right part of the x? Also, maybe straighten the upper left - lower right stroke somewhat?? You are obviously going for a 'raw' look on the X, but maybe it is a little too raw??

Good luck.

Title: Re: I need a critique on a design
Post by Tiannia on Nov 13^th, 2003, 3:24pm

I like the angle of it better on the middle right hand side ones, The red and blue ones.

Good Idea though

Tiannia

Title: Re: I need a critique on a design
Post by athos12 on Nov 13^th, 2003, 3:27pm

cool

Title: Re: I need a critique on a design
Post by Tiannia on Nov 13^th, 2003, 3:44pm

Sorry - I did not see it, and the angle is right but I like the green one in the lower left hand corner as it over layes with the image below it. Sorry, but as you can see from my drawings, I really like the plays with depth and shadows, it draws the eye more, in my honest opinion.

Tian

Title: Re: I need a critique on a design
Post by Little Deb on Nov 13^th, 2003, 3:51pm

I like the one with the shadow of "up" under it. Cause it is clarifying the meaning.

I too have no artistic talent.... :-/

Great idea.

LD

Title: Re: I need a critique on a design
Post by Cerberus on Nov 14^th, 2003, 12:17pm

I like it :)

Ramon

Title: Re: I need a critique on a design
Post by Prense on Nov 14^th, 2003, 10:12pm

I wanna T-shirt with OUCH on the front left...kinda small, and with the X "up arrow" across the back (big).

Make that 2...XL please! ;;D