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(Message started by: sandie99 on Oct 16^th, 2007, 1:22pm)

Title: Painland (poem)
Post by sandie99 on Oct 16^th, 2007, 1:22pm

Painland

I can heal my heart
I can heal my soul
just someone take away this pain
so I can be myself again
here it comes again

I'm lost in the land of pain
I'm lost in the land of pain
my sky is getting darker
my pain is getting harder

I don't know if I can take it
I don't know how long I can hold on
I don't know if I will make it
I don't know if the sun will shine again
I'm tired, I don't know what to do next
Will I fail this test

I hate this uncertainty
I want to live peacefully

I just want to be me
whoever I might be
once this devil is done with me.

I wrote this poem last night, between hits.

PF days to us all,
Sanna

Title: Re: Painland (poem)
Post by Rosybabe on Oct 16^th, 2007, 1:30pm

http://i169.photobucket.com/albums/u228/YEA_055/hugs-kisses--041.gif

Rosy.

Title: Re: Painland (poem)
Post by NJRik on Oct 16^th, 2007, 1:50pm

Beautiful poem. Say's it all for me.

Thank You, Rik.

Title: Re: Painland (poem)
Post by phil_h on Oct 16^th, 2007, 2:27pm

Sanna, A truly articulate and dark poem. Well done... phil h

Title: Re: Painland (poem)
Post by nani on Oct 16^th, 2007, 2:32pm

Beautiful, but sad. :'(

[smiley=hug.gif]

Stay strong, sweetness. :-*
hugs, nani

Title: Re: Painland (poem)
Post by ski2k on Oct 17^th, 2007, 12:05am

I like it.... Too bad you had to feel the pain you were writing about...

PF wishes,

Adam

Title: Re: Painland (poem)
Post by sldrswyfe on Oct 17^th, 2007, 3:31am

Love You Sanna Girl... :'(

That you use your pain for inspiration to write is incredible.

:)

Title: Re: Painland (poem)
Post by Wayne on Oct 17^th, 2007, 3:37am

Really says what we feel, you wrap the words around it very well! Hope this day brings happier thoughts to you Sanna.

Title: Re: Painland (poem)
Post by sandie99 on Oct 17^th, 2007, 3:54am

Thank you all so much. :)

on 10/17/07 at 03:31:26, sldrswyfe wrote:

That you use your pain for inspiration to write is incredible.

Sherri, they do say that 'write about what you know' and unfourtunately ch is one of those things I know bit about. :-X

PF days to us all,
Sanna

Title: Re: Painland (poem)
Post by artonio7 on Oct 17^th, 2007, 5:58am

Sanna that cut right to the heart of the matter. Beautiful!!!!!!

You have a gift! Have you considered submitting your works to the OUCH newsletter?

with warm regards,
Tony

Title: Re: Painland (poem)
Post by Emily on Oct 17^th, 2007, 6:05am

I love it. You are very talented!

Em

Title: Re: Painland (poem)
Post by George_J on Oct 17^th, 2007, 9:41am

[smiley=hug.gif]

Title: Re: Painland (poem)
Post by Ray on Oct 17^th, 2007, 11:03am

on 10/17/07 at 03:31:26, sldrswyfe wrote:

Love You Sanna Girl... :'(

That you use your pain for inspiration to write is incredible.

:)

Exactly my thoughts -- You are an inspiration. I pray for PF and inspiration!

Ray

Title: Re: Painland (poem)
Post by sandie99 on Oct 18^th, 2007, 4:14am

Thank you guys. Again. :)

on 10/17/07 at 05:58:52, artonio7 wrote:

You have a gift! Have you considered submitting your works to the OUCH newsletter?

Actually, I haven't thought about that one. Maybe I should... If the newsletter team wants to use that one, feel free to do that. :)

PF days to us all,
Sanna

Title: Re: Painland (poem)
Post by Smurfysmurff on Oct 18^th, 2007, 5:28am

Sanna.

From the words of Bruce Almighty, that was B.E.A. Utiful. I'm a (former) English Comp major, and you're right, they always say, Write what you know. Wonderful poem.

Rane