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(Message started by: Daddys_Devil on Oct 16^th, 2006, 3:34pm)

Title: Poems. For my brother.
Post by Daddys_Devil on Oct 16^th, 2006, 3:34pm

Hiding in the Shadows
Hiding in the shadows.
The pain won't leave.
Don't let it take me.
Don't see me cry.
Cold sweeps through.
A stealing breath.
It's to strong.
The hurting rools on.
You can't hear me scream.
It's trapped in my head.
Hiding in the shadows.
The pain's finally gone.
It didn't get me yet.
You didn't see my tears.
Hiding in the sahdows.

If the World Slipped Away
If the world slipped away,
I'd grab the last bit and give it to you.
If you died today,
I'd trade your life for mine.
If you were blind,
I'd take your eyes so you could see beauty.
If I knew you wouldn't mind,
I'd gentaly kiss away your tears.
If I could be there,
I'd tell you how much you save me every time.

No words. Feeling down. More later.

Always,
Felicia 8)

Title: Re: Poems. For my brother.
Post by maffumatt on Oct 16^th, 2006, 4:37pm

If the world slipped away,
I'd grab the last bit and give it to you.

I love this line. Good work as usual ;;D

Title: Re: Poems. For my brother.
Post by Daddys_Devil on Oct 16^th, 2006, 6:17pm

Glad you liked it. As I promised here's some more. For you big bro.

Try Not to Cry
I dream away the day.
And watch the clouds go by.
Hiding the pain.
Trying not to cry.
Sharp as a blade.
Thick as blood.
I sit here waiting.
Waiting for the flood.
I dream away the day.
And watch the clouds go by.
Hiding the pain.
Trying not to.
Oh just let me cry!

If it hadn't been for you
If it hadn't been for you,
I would never known who I was.
If it hadn't been for you,
I would have lost my mind.
If it hadn't been for you,
I surely would have died.
If it hadn't been for you.

Always,
Felicia 8)

Title: Re: Poems. For my brother.
Post by Barak on Oct 16^th, 2006, 6:34pm

awesome work as usual. one of these days ill get around to writting again and ill show you some of mine but yeah keep it up and ill keep reading<3

Title: Re: Poems. For my brother.
Post by cynjeep89 on Oct 16^th, 2006, 6:40pm

Nice job, as always!!!
Keep on writing!!

Title: Re: Poems. For my brother.
Post by Paul98 on Oct 16^th, 2006, 8:17pm

Wonderful Felicia! I wish I had your talent. ;)

-P.

Title: Re: Poems. For my brother.
Post by thebbz on Oct 16^th, 2006, 8:41pm

[smiley=deal2.gif]
More to come right?
I liked the shadow one.
all the best
jb

Title: Re: Poems. For my brother.
Post by Daddys_Devil on Oct 16^th, 2006, 9:00pm

on 10/16/06 at 20:41:05, thebbz wrote:

[smiley=deal2.gif]
More to come right?
I liked the shadow one.
all the best
jb

Maaayyybbee. I don't know yet. You guys think you can handle another one? ;) What shall I make this one about? I've got 'em all so let me know! ;;D

Barak, I defiantly want to see one of yours soon. A little sister could use some more insperation(hint hint ;)). Didn't think it was possable but I'm running out! :o

Always,
Felicia 8)

Title: Re: Poems. For my brother.
Post by Daddys_Devil on Oct 17^th, 2006, 6:51am

Well, here's another anyways. Hope you like it. Maybe next time I'll get something different up.

Standing behind me.
Always there waiting.
Ready to catch me if I fall.
Helping me up when I need it.
Always pushing me to go ahead.
Never ever letting me down.
Yes, he's my big brother.
And my best friend.
He's a stranger.
He's always,
Standing behind me.

Always,
Felicia 8)

Title: Re: Poems. For my brother.
Post by LeLimey on Oct 17^th, 2006, 12:06pm

Felicia I love them. I really do. Keep them all because one day I truly believe you'll write books and I will buy them with real pride.
lots of love
Helen xxx

Title: Re: Poems. For my brother.
Post by no-one on Oct 17^th, 2006, 3:15pm

Felicia,

What can I say they are wonderfull as always. Your poems make us think and feel. Some times they make us smile and cry. Keep writing.
love you
b

Title: Re: Poems. For my brother.
Post by Daddys_Devil on Oct 17^th, 2006, 4:07pm

One to make you cry.

Feel like dying.
Blue eyes crying.
Standin' in the rain.
Washing way the pain.
Left out here all alone.
Where is called home?
Feeling the freezing cold.
Looking for someone to hold.
Leave me alone!
I don't need you.
Wait don't leave.
What am I saying?
Help me please.
Feel like dying.
Blue eyes crying.
Standing in the rain.
Ready to except my pain.

Always,
Felicia 8)