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(Message started by: Tiannia on Oct 5th, 2006, 12:39pm)

Title: Dark Side of me - A poem - Fitting it seems
Post by Tiannia on Oct 5th, 2006, 12:39pm
there's a dark side of me
i can't let you see
a side that's hateful and scorns

there's a dark side of me
i won't let be free
a side that's tattered and torn

there's a dark side of me
raging in silence
screaming in terror
afraid of the violence

emotions must, at all costs
be kept inside, or i'll be lost
feelings stay hidden
and memories past
i'm afraid to show you
i cannot last

there's a dark side of me
that rages inside
violence, anger and suicide
the dark side of me
always alone

the dark side of me
i'm learning to own


Wrote a little while ago when things where very difficult with my marriage, the beast rearing his head again and I was afraid my meds where not working again, well everything was just getting to be a bit much.  

It is amazing how much it htelps to express yourself even if no one else sees it or hears it at the time. Just so that you can get it out of your head and maybe see a path that you where blinded to before.

Title: Re: Dark Side of me - A poem
Post by Ghost on Oct 5th, 2006, 1:04pm
That is incredible!
Perfectly worded and straight to the heart.
Feels like it was written for me!

I know it wasn't but thanks for sharing it .

Mike

Title: Re: Dark Side of me - A poem
Post by Tiannia on Oct 5th, 2006, 1:14pm
I had not looked at it for about 3 minths now. And when I read it again, well it seemed that people here would relate, all in thier own way.

/huggs Mike

Title: Re: Dark Side of me - A poem
Post by JeffB on Oct 5th, 2006, 1:25pm
Very nice, T.
:)

Title: Re: Dark Side of me - A poem
Post by Tiannia on Oct 9th, 2006, 5:10pm
Thank you hun.

This is rather a sad piece concerding the tone on the boards today.

Title: Re: Dark Side of me - A poem
Post by brewcrew on Oct 9th, 2006, 5:24pm

on 10/05/06 at 13:04:19, Ghost wrote:
Feels like it was written for me!

I know it wasn't but thanks for sharing it .

That's the thing about well-written poetry - it feels like it's about ME, not just about SOMEBODY ELSE.

Very well done, Tia.

Title: Re: Dark Side of me - A poem - Fitting it seems
Post by ShariRae on Oct 9th, 2006, 10:33pm
WOW!

Much Love,
Shari

Title: Re: Dark Side of me - A poem - Fitting it seems
Post by Tiannia on Oct 12th, 2006, 12:11pm
/hugs

Thank you Shari



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