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Title: Dark Side of me - A poem - Fitting it seems Post by Tiannia on Oct 5th, 2006, 12:39pm i can't let you see a side that's hateful and scorns there's a dark side of me i won't let be free a side that's tattered and torn there's a dark side of me raging in silence screaming in terror afraid of the violence emotions must, at all costs be kept inside, or i'll be lost feelings stay hidden and memories past i'm afraid to show you i cannot last there's a dark side of me that rages inside violence, anger and suicide the dark side of me always alone the dark side of me i'm learning to own Wrote a little while ago when things where very difficult with my marriage, the beast rearing his head again and I was afraid my meds where not working again, well everything was just getting to be a bit much. It is amazing how much it htelps to express yourself even if no one else sees it or hears it at the time. Just so that you can get it out of your head and maybe see a path that you where blinded to before. |
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Title: Re: Dark Side of me - A poem Post by Ghost on Oct 5th, 2006, 1:04pm That is incredible! Perfectly worded and straight to the heart. Feels like it was written for me! I know it wasn't but thanks for sharing it . Mike |
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Title: Re: Dark Side of me - A poem Post by Tiannia on Oct 5th, 2006, 1:14pm I had not looked at it for about 3 minths now. And when I read it again, well it seemed that people here would relate, all in thier own way. /huggs Mike |
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Title: Re: Dark Side of me - A poem Post by JeffB on Oct 5th, 2006, 1:25pm Very nice, T. :) |
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Title: Re: Dark Side of me - A poem Post by Tiannia on Oct 9th, 2006, 5:10pm Thank you hun. This is rather a sad piece concerding the tone on the boards today. |
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Title: Re: Dark Side of me - A poem Post by brewcrew on Oct 9th, 2006, 5:24pm on 10/05/06 at 13:04:19, Ghost wrote:
That's the thing about well-written poetry - it feels like it's about ME, not just about SOMEBODY ELSE. Very well done, Tia. |
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Title: Re: Dark Side of me - A poem - Fitting it seems Post by ShariRae on Oct 9th, 2006, 10:33pm WOW! Much Love, Shari |
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Title: Re: Dark Side of me - A poem - Fitting it seems Post by Tiannia on Oct 12th, 2006, 12:11pm /hugs Thank you Shari |
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