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(Message started by: Daddys_Devil on Oct 1^st, 2006, 10:05pm)

Title: I feel like crying. Poem.
Post by Daddys_Devil on Oct 1^st, 2006, 10:05pm

I feel like crying.
I wanna run to you
and have you hold me tight.
I miss eveything about you
and I feel so alone.
Why can't you be here?
Why can't you take me home?
I love you and you don't know.
The pain wells inside.
It just won't go.
Tears flow like a river.
Leaving trails in the dust.
Unable to tell you
how I feel.
I hold my head high.
Only crying when I'm alone.
All that others see is a face of stone.
I wish you where here.
I feel like crying.

Thank you.

Always,
Felicia 8)

Title: Re: I feel like crying. Poem.
Post by ShadowLord on Oct 1^st, 2006, 10:30pm

I've said it once, and I'll prolly say it at least a few more times... Your poetry is beautiful, emotional, powerful, amazing!

PFDAN.................................................... ShadowLrd

Title: Beautiful poem
Post by alienspacebabe on Oct 1^st, 2006, 11:07pm

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Title: Re: I feel like crying. Poem.
Post by Carl_D on Oct 1^st, 2006, 11:14pm

:'(

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Title: Re: I feel like crying. Poem.
Post by Changeling_J on Oct 1^st, 2006, 11:50pm

I really like your poetry. :3

It evokes a lot of emotions and images when read, either silently or out loud.

Title: Re: I feel like crying. Poem.
Post by georgej on Oct 1^st, 2006, 11:53pm

Your poem is very moving Felicia--I enjoyed reading it. Your writing just gets better and better. <smile>

Thank you for posting it.

George

on 10/01/06 at 23:50:09, Changeling_J wrote:

I really like your poetry. :3

It evokes a lot of emotions and images when read, either silently or out loud.

Hey! Hi El!

...now I know what you're doing on the internet this evening. ;;D

--Your poor old Dad.

Title: Re: I feel like crying. Poem.
Post by LeLimey on Oct 2^nd, 2006, 5:16am

Felicia that was beautiful.
Thank you
Helen

Title: Re: I feel like crying. Poem.
Post by no-one on Oct 2^nd, 2006, 6:54am

Felicia,
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmm what can I say, but keep up the great work.
Love you
b

Title: Re: I feel like crying. Poem.
Post by maffumatt on Oct 2^nd, 2006, 6:55am

Thank you

Title: Re: I feel like crying. Poem.
Post by Daddys_Devil on Oct 2^nd, 2006, 7:11am

You're welcome. Not many words today. :( Glad you liked it.

Always,
Felicia 8)

Title: Re: I feel like crying. Poem.
Post by Daddys_Devil on Oct 2^nd, 2006, 3:39pm

Heres a few more.

Silently Alone
That look you give me,
sends shivers down my spine.
And the screaming of the silence
echos through my mind.
The pain won't fade
and you don't understand.
though you don't know it,
you hold my heart in your hand.
You don't know the pain I feel,
and don't even try.
Just walk away,
and leave me to silently cry.

For the Clusters:
I Stayed With You
When I found you, you where
banging your head against the wall.
I was scared to death
when I got your call.
I knew just what to do,
to try and sooth your pain.
I held you close and let your tears
fall like the rain.
You begged me not to leave
and I promised I wouldn't.
I stayed with you into the night
even though I knew I shouldn't.
When you finally fell asleep
I smiled at your peace.
And thanked the gods
to have finally killed the beast.

Always,
Felicia 8)

Title: Re: I feel like crying. Poem.
Post by LeLimey on Oct 2^nd, 2006, 3:46pm

I've got goosebumps from reading those Felicia.
Remind me again how old you are because my daughter will be 13 in May and she couldn't write like that in ten years never mind two..

You are going to be one phenomenal woman, you already are but wow, when you hit you're majority the world is going to know it! I only know one other kid like you and I know you know him too!

You're amazing
Helen

Title: Re: I feel like crying. Poem.
Post by nani on Oct 2^nd, 2006, 4:16pm

Powerful as always, honey. I feel like crying now, also.
big hugs, nani

Title: Re: I feel like crying. Poem.
Post by Daddys_Devil on Oct 2^nd, 2006, 7:12pm

Sorry to make you feel as sh*ty as me. Again not many words for today. Glad you all liked it.

Always,
Felicia 8)

Title: Re: I feel like crying. Poem.(plus 1 happy 1)
Post by Daddys_Devil on Oct 3^rd, 2006, 3:50pm

A Day in My Imagination
The sky will shine.
The wind will softly blow.
I will look at the far off moutains
covered in sparkling snow.
The fowers will fill the air
with sweet perfume.
And the soft sweet music
to which we dance will consume.
I will lay in the long grass
to watch the clouds take shape.
And let the warmth of the day
lull me to sleep like a heave drape.
When the warm rain starts to fall
I will dance like a child once again.

Hope you guys like it. I know they've been really dark lately so I thought I'd change it up. Still not may words that haven't already been said so I'll leave you to yourselves but I'd like to know what you think.

Always,
Felicia 8)

Title: Re: I feel like crying. Poem.
Post by LeLimey on Oct 3^rd, 2006, 4:04pm

Oh Felicia I love this one, it describes things I love to do and feels like you've taken a walk through my mind (sorry for the lack of things to do in there!) I could lie watching clouds all day (or stare into a fire) seeing castles and dragons.. I can sit here and get lost in thought just by the images you've conjured and it's a nice feeling. There's an innocence and a freshness in reading this that I've really needed after the horrid news events of the last few days. Thank you
Helen

Title: Re: I feel like crying. Poem.
Post by drivin_blind on Oct 3^rd, 2006, 4:59pm

Those are kind of tough. (for me). My daughter and grand daughter lived with us for a little over a year (from one to two) then moved to Virginia. We got very close. I miss her soooo much. My wife and I are going down to see them the 13th of this month. We are pumped. You have a gift. I usually don't like poetry, yours hits the point. You should try to write for some of the card companies or try to get published-really!