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(Message started by: Daddys_Devil on Aug 19^th, 2006, 11:18am)

Title: Dancing to no Music. Newest Poem
Post by Daddys_Devil on Aug 19^th, 2006, 11:18am

Wrote this last night but didn't have time to post. Hope everyone likes it.

Dancing to no Music
Eyes on fire.
Time to rock.
Pacing the floor.
Watching the clock.
I'm scared to death.
'Cause the pain won't leave.
Ready to end it.
Someone shoot me please.
Without music,
the dance goes on.
Wanting to disapear.
Wishing the pain gone.
You shout.
I want to scream.
Try to get to the place.
The place in between.
Eyes on fire.
Time to rock.
Pacing the floor.
Watching the clock.

Always,
Felicia 8)

Title: Re: Dancing to no Music. Newest Poem
Post by no-one on Aug 19^th, 2006, 4:43pm

:'(
as always right on target
hugs
:)

b

Title: Re: Dancing to no Music. Newest Poem
Post by Jonny on Aug 19^th, 2006, 4:56pm

WOW!!!!

That hit home, Kid!

Title: Re: Dancing to no Music. Newest Poem
Post by Redd715 on Aug 19^th, 2006, 5:13pm

All too familiar Chills Felicia.

Thank you you are dead on.

Title: Re: Dancing to no Music. Newest Poem
Post by georgej on Aug 19^th, 2006, 9:40pm

on 08/19/06 at 11:18:17, Daddys_Devil wrote:

Try to get to the place.
The place in between.

Felicia, those two lines were like icewater thrown over me. I've never found the "place in between", despite trying to find it for a very long time.

Nice job.

Best,

George

Title: Re: Dancing to no Music. Newest Poem
Post by Paul98 on Aug 19^th, 2006, 10:15pm

Real nice Felicia, real nice!

-P.

Title: Re: Dancing to no Music. Newest Poem
Post by Carl_D on Aug 20^th, 2006, 3:10am

I want to put music to that!!!

I AM SERIOUS!!!

This is a depth you should not know. God bless you Felicia. [smiley=hug.gif]

Peace,
Carl D

Title: Re: Dancing to no Music. Newest Poem
Post by Daddys_Devil on Aug 20^th, 2006, 10:24am

Thanks guys. Glad you liked it.

George, I know exactly what you mean. I've been trying to get there all my life. It seems I've been fighting everything my whole life. And everytime I get a little bit closer, it moves farther away. :-[ Mom asked why I was hidding out in the rain once. I told her it was nothing but after she left I said (to myself) that I was trying to get away from her, from my sister, or from what ever it is that I'm running from. I hope to find out what that is soon.

Carl, if you can do it, have at. I'd like to hear it when you get it finished. And as for knowing it at this depth at this age, well, I guess that it all depends on who you're talking to. If I meet everyone some day, you'll think a little differently. Let's just say I'm not your ordinary 14 year old girl. As some of you may have noticed. ;)

How's about another one. This one doesn't deal with the pain of CH. But of a forbiden love. And I know that all of us has felt that at least once or twice before. This one's called Black Love.

When I see you, my broken heart
beats just a little bit faster.
You're the reason,
that I live for tomorrow.
Like a blade,your eyes,
they cut straight to my soul.
One day, I'll steal
your hard heart.
Just as you
took mine.
Broken and brused,
together we'll be.
I'm trapped here.
Trapped in a black, forbiden love.

Always,
Felicia 8)

Title: Re: Dancing to no Music. Newest Poem
Post by Charlotte on Aug 20^th, 2006, 11:37am

I love the new poem. Sometimes the love is not forbidden, just crippled.

I'd like to hear Carl put it to music, too.

My youngest is 17. I was still having kids when my friends & siblings were having grandkids. My daughter Cathy is protective, also.

For those of us who had wondered, this is the pain of a supporter.

Charlotte

Title: Re: Dancing to no Music. Newest Poem
Post by Ree on Aug 20^th, 2006, 1:19pm

<>Felecia<>That was awesome.... You are well beyond your years... Your poetry is a window to your soul... keep up the good work... Poetry has been therapy for me in the hardest fases of my life~~~ Write on young friend.... love ree <><

Title: Re: Dancing to no Music. Newest Poem
Post by nani on Aug 20^th, 2006, 1:49pm

Wow. Awesome work, kiddo.
hugs and love, nani

Title: Re: Dancing to no Music. Newest Poem
Post by Carl_D on Aug 21^st, 2006, 12:19am

on 08/20/06 at 10:24:42, Daddys_Devil wrote:

Carl, if you can do it, have at. I'd like to hear it when you get it finished. And as for knowing it at this depth at this age, well, I guess that it all depends on who you're talking to. If I meet everyone some day, you'll think a little differently. Let's just say I'm not your ordinary 14 year old girl. As some of you may have noticed. ;)

Thanks Felicia. When it is recorded, it will be posted. It may take a few days to complete, but I will post it when mixed down.

:-*
Carl D

Title: Re: Dancing to no Music. Newest Poem
Post by boonie on Aug 21^st, 2006, 4:55pm

nice writing

this one goes up on my poem board

boonie

Title: Re: Dancing to no Music. Newest Poem
Post by zwibbs/Scott on Aug 21^st, 2006, 4:57pm

That was truly great ! Wonderful Job !

Title: Re: Dancing to no Music. Newest Poem
Post by LadyLuv on Aug 21^st, 2006, 5:24pm

:'( :'( Never a more direct hit.....

Luv Ya LL

Title: Re: Dancing to no Music. Newest Poem
Post by Shazza on Aug 21^st, 2006, 5:34pm

WOW!!!!!

You have a beautiful gift.....keep it up!

Shazza xx

Title: Re: Dancing to no Music. Newest Poem
Post by Daddys_Devil on Aug 21^st, 2006, 7:07pm

:) Gald everyone liked them. I've been in a writing mood lately. I'll keep 'em coming as fast as I can. Thanks for all the comments.

Always,
Felicia 8)