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(Message started by: thomas on May 19^th, 2006, 9:22pm)

Title: Abandoned by Chris Lee
Post by thomas on May 19^th, 2006, 9:22pm

My 14 year old son Chris wrote this, I really like it. I hope you do to.

Abandoned

In the black-eyed fever
Of the jagged night,
Spurned by the moon,
Stabbed by the light,
Too twisted to think,
Too ragged to sleep,
I lie broken in half,
Unable to mend myself;

In the dead vacuum,
I feel much betrayed,
I feel quite frail,
I make vain excuses,
I rail against life,
But all to no avail;

In the razor dark,
Flopping in anguish
On my stinking bed,
Only one small fact
Sits
Crystal clear:
In my moment of fear,
In my moment of pain,
When I needed it most,
Hope let me down--
Just like a soft slimy slug,
It slithered out of my sight.

This You May Not Know But This Is How I Feel When Your Eyes Meet Mine.

posted by Gena

Title: Re: Abandoned by Chris Lee
Post by Cerberus on May 20^th, 2006, 2:37am

awwwwwwwwwwwwww

give him a hug for me G!

posted by woobie :-*

Title: Re: Abandoned by Chris Lee
Post by Jasmyn on May 20^th, 2006, 2:44am

Great stuff! He has the talent, very deep, very good.

Title: Re: Abandoned by Chris Lee
Post by sandie99 on May 20^th, 2006, 2:50am

Loved it!
Thank you for sharing it. :)

Sanna

Title: Re: Abandoned by Chris Lee
Post by catlind on May 20^th, 2006, 11:56am

That's powerful...I have a 14 year old.

Wow

Title: Re: Abandoned by Chris Lee
Post by Melissa on May 20^th, 2006, 12:05pm

Wow.....just....wow :o

Title: Re: Abandoned by Chris Lee
Post by Redd715 on May 20^th, 2006, 12:25pm

Yep....very deep.

Very raw.

Very nicely done.

Thank you.