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(Message started by: sandie99 on Apr 2^nd, 2006, 11:22am)

Title: What do you think...
Post by sandie99 on Apr 2^nd, 2006, 11:22am

... about these lyrics I wrote yesterday while I was waiting for a hit to go away?

Never mind my errors... ;;D

OUT OF MY HANDS

Maybe one of these days
I will stop crying
Maybe one of these days
I will stop dying inside
every time
words will hit me like a rock
There's too much life
I can't control

Chorus:
It's out of my hands now
I'll surrender
I'll give it all to Him
lead me home

I've been trying so hard
to be somebody they could be proud of
I didn't realize that all those lies I told myself
were just self defence
I was scared of life itself
now I can't pretend
I try to stand on my own two feet
and pray that one day I'll be blessed

Chorus

I've done my share of mistakes
I've got my share of regrets
and there are plenty of wrong turns
I haven't taken yet
But I get stronger by every day I face
there are many lessons I've learned
but I'm not taking the blame

Chorus

When the Judgement Day comes
I hope I've done more things right
I hope I've shared enough of love
and picked the right side in every fight
I'm far from perfect
but God made me this way
there must be a reason
why I'm alive today

Chorus

I'll pray that you'll be blessed in the end
I'll pray that you'll be blessed

Title: Re: What do you think...
Post by zwibbs/Scott on Apr 2^nd, 2006, 11:42am

IMG]http://i53.photobucket.com/albums/g50/zwibbs11/squirrel.jpg[/IMG]

Title: Re: What do you think...
Post by zwibbs/Scott on Apr 2^nd, 2006, 11:43am

Sandie---It was very very good !!!

Title: Re: What do you think...
Post by Sandy_C on Apr 2^nd, 2006, 1:57pm

Very nice, Sandie. There's some talent there - good for you!

Sandy

Title: Re: What do you think...
Post by Cerberus on Apr 2^nd, 2006, 2:03pm

I give it a 9... the content was good and you can dance to it! ;)

'Bus

Title: Re: What do you think...
Post by zwibbs/Scott on Apr 2^nd, 2006, 3:53pm

Cer-like me you are showing your age---Dick Clark

Title: Re: What do you think...
Post by mynm156 on Apr 2^nd, 2006, 5:00pm

Nice,

How could you know if you could dance to it without the music? What if it is acapella?

Title: Re: What do you think...
Post by Langa on Apr 3^rd, 2006, 10:08am

I really liked it Sandie and Crys printed it out for her project. ;)

Langa

Title: Re: What do you think...
Post by nani on Apr 3^rd, 2006, 10:56am

Sanna...it's GREAT! I really, really, like it. :D
great job! hugs, nani

Title: Re: What do you think...
Post by Lizzie2 on Apr 3^rd, 2006, 3:38pm

Sanna,

I like the lyrics a lot!! Do you have a "tune" to it in your head? If not - want me to put it to music? I don't have a LOT of experience with songwriting, but I have composed lots of music over time for my music degree and other things. I love to do melodies and stuff like that, but I totally suck at writing lyrics.

So how bout you write the lyrics and I'll write the music? hehehe

Do you hear it going fast or slow? Major or minor? You'll have to let me know if you have your own tune you hear it fitting to.

Very nice!!

Hugz,
Carrie :)

Title: Re: What do you think...
Post by KMT on Apr 3^rd, 2006, 8:40pm

Sandie

I thought it was wonderful you are very talented keep it up. Thanks for sharing it..Kim

Title: Re: What do you think...
Post by sandie99 on Apr 4^th, 2006, 11:03am

Thank you all for feedback. :)

on 04/03/06 at 15:38:06, Lizzie2 wrote:

Do you have a "tune" to it in your head? If not - want me to put it to music?

So how bout you write the lyrics and I'll write the music? hehehe

Carrie,

usually when I write lyrics I indeed hear a tune for them, too. :) But with this one... no tune whatsoever, which is new for me.

I'd love to hear this one as a proper song, so it would be wonderful if you could compose the melody for it. :) What you had in mind?

I'll do the lyrics, you write the music... sounds good to me! ;) Charts, here we come! ;;D

Best wishes,
Sanna

Title: Re: What do you think...
Post by minnie on Apr 4^th, 2006, 11:16am

[smiley=jammin.gif] [smiley=thumb.gif] [smiley=jammin.gif] [smiley=thumb.gif]
such talent thats great Sanna .Carrie I read this yesterday w/no time to reply.I was sure that with all the talented musicians on this board we'd have a beautiful song in no time.
Minnie