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(Message started by: AussieBrian on Jan 28^th, 2005, 7:17pm)

Title: Stalked.
Post by AussieBrian on Jan 28^th, 2005, 7:17pm

Staring at an empty page,
Pen in hand, mind all black.
The beast is prowling, hear it growling,
Circling ready for next attack.
Too scared to sleep, to weak to weep,
Cowering in fear of what's ahead,
I know it can't kill me, but still it can fill me
With terror unquenchable, bottomless dread.

No second chances, the monster advances,
The stalking's over, it's time for the fight.
No ducking or weaving, just bucking and heaving,
The claws have sunk in and now here comes the bite.
The lashing, the crashing, the gnashing of teeth,
As my skull slowly crumples, bone torn apart.
Talons of fire take my eye entire,
It's merciless, endless, cut blind to the heart.

How long has it been, a minute? A year?
Where am I? Is it over, or just a reprieve?
I know that it's out there just watching, and waiting,
and gloating, and hoping I really believe
That it's gone forever, in future it'll never
Come back to attack, where-ever and when.
I'm beaten, defeated, the beast has feasted
again, and again, and again and again.

Title: Re: Stalked.
Post by BlueMeanie on Jan 28^th, 2005, 7:20pm

Wow...... That is kickass Aussie Brian. Putting that in my CH scrapbook.

Title: Re: Stalked.
Post by ghost62 on Jan 28^th, 2005, 7:27pm

:'( Now that was right on the money WOW!!!!
thats all i can say

Title: Re: Stalked.
Post by nani on Jan 28^th, 2005, 7:30pm

Wow...that's great Brian...great. Thanks. love, nani

Title: Re: Stalked.
Post by maureen on Jan 28^th, 2005, 8:23pm

WOW I'm speechless!

Title: Re: Stalked.
Post by Redd715 on Jan 28^th, 2005, 8:26pm

Glad someone has taken over where others have been shunned for treading...

Title: Re: Stalked.
Post by Redneck on Jan 28^th, 2005, 9:13pm

right on the money dude! had to print it for some people to read!

Title: Re: Stalked.
Post by K-9 on Jan 28^th, 2005, 9:45pm

That was good!!! Reading while not getting hit, you can still feel it.

Title: Re: Stalked.
Post by sandie99 on Jan 29^th, 2005, 3:39am

We NEED that place for poetry! So many talented poets around here...

That was amazing. :)
Thank you.

Title: Re: Stalked.
Post by Charlie on Jan 29^th, 2005, 3:54am

Works for me too. 8)

This kind of talent seems like some kind of compensation for having to deal with this horror......if you believe in such things......

Charlie

Title: Re: Stalked.
Post by PrettyH8Machine on Jan 29^th, 2005, 6:48am

Too fucken cool!!!!!

CD

Title: Re: Stalked.
Post by boonie on Jan 29^th, 2005, 12:22pm

this one goes on my wall

Title: Re: Stalked.
Post by BMoneeTheMoneeMan on Jan 29^th, 2005, 1:02pm

man, noone could understand what it is like to be stalked unless they are also stalked.
Good writing Brian
PF wishes
BMonee

Title: Re: Stalked.
Post by toolong on Jan 30^th, 2005, 11:48am

Holy shit!!I wish my brain would work like that.What you have put to words is my nightly thoughts when I go to bed.Well done AussieBrian,WELL DONE!David