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(Message started by: Jonny on Aug 5^th, 2004, 6:14pm)

Title: Re: From The Garden
Post by Jonny on Aug 5^th, 2004, 6:14pm

on 08/05/04 at 14:52:19, Jeepgun wrote:

Like Rapunzel, I implore thee,
"Let down thy hair!"

I aint letting down my hair for your ass....Homo! ;;D

Take the fucking stairs.......LMAO

..................................jonny ;)

Title: Re: From The Garden
Post by Kevin_M on Aug 5^th, 2004, 6:27pm

Quote:

Bound and smothered in gray-brown gowns
of stiff, scratchy lace, shrug them off!
For what richer raiment can there be, than
the sky, the wind, and the fragrance of flowers?
Rip the laces of the confining bodice so that you may
stretch wide your arms as you whirl into the sun!
Pin up your skirts as pantaloons, so you may
leap, run, tumble, and dance and dance and dance!
Kick off those narrow shoes that bind and pinch!
Sweep the pins from your lustrous hair and shake

Refining that "get her out of her clothes" rap, aren't you Frank. I like hair first, wait on the heels.

Kevin M

Title: Re: From The Garden
Post by Jeepgun on Aug 5^th, 2004, 7:28pm

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Title: Re: From The Garden
Post by Kevin_M on Aug 5^th, 2004, 8:04pm

on 08/05/04 at 19:28:51, Jeepgun wrote:

....

Now this one is a bit abstract for me Frank but good flow, rhythm and punctuation use. Ya gotta read in between the dots and what's not said I guess. Of what period is this style?

Kevin M

Title: Re: From The Garden
Post by Jeepgun on Aug 6^th, 2004, 7:48am

It's from the "fuck it, I quit" period/style. Like it?

Title: Re: From The Garden
Post by purpleydog on Aug 6^th, 2004, 8:54am

Beautiful, Frank...

Title: Re: From The Garden
Post by Kevin_M on Aug 6^th, 2004, 9:05am

on 08/06/04 at 07:48:27, Jeepgun wrote:

Like it?

Without the imagery, it raised a certain interpretive curiousity. Subtle, but less expressive, I understand now Frank.

Kevin M

Title: Re: From The Garden
Post by Jeepgun on Aug 6^th, 2004, 12:51pm

A new composition. I worked really hard on this one, too. Ready?

The cat
Shat
In the hat