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(Message started by: Jeepgun on Jul 29^th, 2004, 4:03pm)

Title: The Concertina Song
Post by Jeepgun on Jul 29^th, 2004, 4:03pm

Coils and coils of concertina
Singing serpents of nightmare pain
Spring sling slash inside my head
Can't bear to go through this again

Lacerate my eye
O God just wanna die
Smash my head against the floor
To (God please!) sleep forever more

Trainwreck in my brain
Writhing burrow into the ground
Eye all shot with blood again
Scream so hard that there's no sound

Bash my brains all out
Lament wail and shout
Pillowcase stained with tears
All the hellish tortured years

And I would give my life
For just one pair of compassionate eyes
Yes I would give my very life for just one word
I would give my life to see an understanding face
Instead of feeling like I'm spinning into outer space...

Coils and coils of concertina
Singing serpents of nightmare pain
Spring sling slash inside my head
Can't bear to go through this again

Lacerate my eye
O God just wanna die
Smash my head against the floor
To (God please!) sleep forever more

-Frank H. Weeden
29 July, 2004

Title: Re: The Concertina Song
Post by Jonny on Jul 29^th, 2004, 4:40pm

Oh Christ!, Im bashing my brains out just for reading that......LMAO ;;D

..................................jonny

Title: Re: The Concertina Song
Post by thomas on Jul 29^th, 2004, 4:44pm

God only knows how many B.D.U. pants I've sacrificed to that shit.

Title: Re: The Concertina Song
Post by Jeepgun on Jul 29^th, 2004, 4:44pm

If I were to set it to music, it would be set to grinding guitars, with the power chords, bassline, and drums neck and neck, like something by Sisters Of Mercy. The bridge, "I would give my life...." would be done with solo piano and mellow 7th chords, perhaps, and it would pitch into the grind again, maybe round out the bridge one more time and fade...

Title: Re: The Concertina Song
Post by Jeepgun on Jul 29^th, 2004, 4:45pm

on 07/29/04 at 16:44:11, thomas wrote:

God only knows how many B.D.U. pants I've sacrificed to that shit.

LOL! Ditto. BDU jackets, too. On the DMZ in Korea, that crap is strung from the west end of the country to the east end of the country... Night land-nav was REAL fun!! NOT!! >:( ;;D

Title: Re: The Concertina Song
Post by Jonny on Jul 29^th, 2004, 4:48pm

on 07/29/04 at 16:44:22, Jeepgun wrote:

Alrighty then!, Id still be bashing my head......but in a good way
[smiley=headbanger.gif]

......................jonny

Title: Re: The Concertina Song
Post by KingOfPain on Jul 29^th, 2004, 5:41pm

WOW! :o

Nice Frank.

Title: Re: The Concertina Song
Post by Jeepgun on Jul 29^th, 2004, 7:24pm

Thanks, Steve. :) There are some things I'd like to tweak yet, but yeah, I could probably dance to it. (spastically...) [smiley=laugh.gif]

Frank
[O|||||O]
JEEP

Title: Re: The Concertina Song
Post by Carl_D on Jul 30^th, 2004, 6:20am

Hmmm. I just happen to know someone who does music.... ;;D
I hear at the moment he is trying to round up gear to record with too...
My people will call your people, Mkay?

Peace, and love it
Carl D

Title: Re: The Concertina Song
Post by Jeepgun on Jul 30^th, 2004, 8:29am

Sounds great, Carl! My number is 931-685-9814, after 6:00p.m. CST. Let's hook up and jam!