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Hey all. Know its been a while but I thought a poem might be able to brighten your day. I've been going through a bit of a rough patch so I've been writing a lot. This happens to be on of my better ones. I hope you like it. This one's called My Wings.
On wings of fire,
I shall fly.
And even in the worst of storm,
they will never die.
The flame empowered,
by my vision.
The wind strengthened,
by my dream.
And even in a nose dive,
I will not scream.
My wings will
set me free.
And help
me to sore.
When I get my wings
I'll forget the score.
On wings of fire,
I shall fly.
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Holding on his hand, when every second of everyday I feel like letting go.
You hurt me before.Never again.I won't give up and I sure as h*ll won't let you win!
My Poems and Stories at:http://www.quizilla.com/users/hiddeninsight/stuff/
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Re: Poem
« Reply #1 on: May 15th, 2008, 5:26pm » |
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Beautiful, Felicia. I'm glad you reminded me that we have wings today. I was feelin' pretty weighed down.
hugs, nani
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Re: Poem
« Reply #2 on: May 15th, 2008, 6:24pm » |
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Loved it! Thanks.
Jerry
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Re: Poem
« Reply #4 on: May 16th, 2008, 12:43am » |
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Wings of fire,, that's the way to cruise.
thebb
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Re: Poem
« Reply #5 on: May 16th, 2008, 12:09pm » |
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Glad you all liked it. This one unfortunatly isn't as light as the first but then again they can't all be. Times here are rough, as some of you know and I guess its gotta be let out some how. This one's called My Paints.
The yellow is my sun,
there's only a little of that.
Green is the grass
it reminds me of where I cried and sat.
Blue is the sky,
that never seems bright enough.
Purple is the dirty bruise,
from when times get tough.
Red is my pouring blood,
in a place where I don't want to look back,
All these colors run together,
and I end up with black.
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Holding on his hand, when every second of everyday I feel like letting go.
You hurt me before.Never again.I won't give up and I sure as h*ll won't let you win!
My Poems and Stories at:http://www.quizilla.com/users/hiddeninsight/stuff/
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Re: Poem
« Reply #6 on: May 16th, 2008, 12:39pm » |
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I like both Felicia.. and I can relate to both too ((HUG))
lots of love
Helen xxx
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Re: Poem
« Reply #7 on: May 17th, 2008, 10:53am » |
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It's been fully 24 hours since the first poem was posted and our good friend 'no-one' hasn't shown up to wax lyrical upon such beautiful writing.
I'm getting worried.
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Re: Poem
« Reply #8 on: May 17th, 2008, 4:28pm » |
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As always I loved both your poems
love and hugs
PF wishes
b
PS sorry it took me so long to post
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Man is what he believes. Anton Chekhov
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Re: Poem
« Reply #9 on: May 18th, 2008, 6:57pm » |
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on May 17th, 2008, 10:53am, AussieBrian wrote:It's been fully 24 hours since the first poem was posted and our good friend 'no-one' hasn't shown up to wax lyrical upon such beautiful writing.
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Better late than never.  Much love to all that've posted and the same to those that haven't. Byes!!! <333
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Holding on his hand, when every second of everyday I feel like letting go.
You hurt me before.Never again.I won't give up and I sure as h*ll won't let you win!
My Poems and Stories at:http://www.quizilla.com/users/hiddeninsight/stuff/
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Re: Poem
« Reply #10 on: May 19th, 2008, 9:17am » |
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So very Beautiful Felicia and truly a part of you.
I have true feelings when I read these.
If you touch but one heart in you lifetime you have lived.
Mike
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