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Listen (Poem)
« on: Mar 12th, 2008, 6:30pm » |
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Yes I'm still alive. Just thought I'd check in. Been real busy. Hope you like it.
Listen to the screaming.
Screaming in my head.
Listen to the pounding.
Pounding to wake the dead.
Listen to this pain.
The pain that drives me mad.
Listen to this fear.
Fear to remind me of what I had.
Listen please to my words.
Take them in stride.
Listen please to my lines.
These words are my pride.
Because this beast,
has taken everything else.
Everything that I have had.
Listen listen please.
To everything I have.
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Holding on his hand, when every second of everyday I feel like letting go.
You hurt me before.Never again.I won't give up and I sure as h*ll won't let you win!
My Poems and Stories at:http://www.quizilla.com/users/hiddeninsight/stuff/
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Re: Listen (Poem)
« Reply #1 on: Mar 12th, 2008, 7:00pm » |
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Good to see you, honey. 
Your writing always evokes very strong emotions in me.
It touches me.
hugs and love, nani
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Re: Listen (Poem)
« Reply #2 on: Mar 12th, 2008, 9:11pm » |
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Thank Nani. Glad you liked it. I've been haunting mostly but I'm always around. Been busy with colorguard, school, my puppy Grizzly (he's so cute!^^), and friends. I'll try to post more so that every one know I'm still around and care about my second family. Gotta run. Byes!!! <333
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Holding on his hand, when every second of everyday I feel like letting go.
You hurt me before.Never again.I won't give up and I sure as h*ll won't let you win!
My Poems and Stories at:http://www.quizilla.com/users/hiddeninsight/stuff/
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Re: Listen (Poem)
« Reply #3 on: Mar 12th, 2008, 11:26pm » |
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Awesome poem!
Thank you for sharing,
Ray
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You have my prayers and compassion-I'm right there with you.
Dum tempus habemus, operemur bonum
*While we have the time, let us do good*
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Re: Listen (Poem)
« Reply #4 on: Mar 12th, 2008, 11:56pm » |
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I am listening 
More please , I have always enjoyed your poems
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Re: Listen (Poem)
« Reply #5 on: Mar 13th, 2008, 12:46am » |
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I must have been away when you developed CH. Sorry you needed to join our little club as sufferer rather than a supporter but at least you know your way around.
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Re: Listen (Poem)
« Reply #6 on: Mar 13th, 2008, 4:31am » |
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Brocken
Your poem is as great. But you are not alone. we are here for you. keep on writing. I love your poems
Love and hugs
PF wishes
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Re: Listen (Poem)
« Reply #7 on: Mar 13th, 2008, 3:58pm » |
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on Mar 13th, 2008, 12:46am, AussieBrian wrote:| I must have been away when you developed CH. Sorry you needed to join our little club as sufferer rather than a supporter but at least you know your way around. |
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Aussie hun I don't have CH. I'm still just a supporter. Sorry to confuse you. I just try to put your pain into words. Thanks again for all the comments. I'll see if I can't whip up another soon. Gotta run now. Byes!!! <333
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Holding on his hand, when every second of everyday I feel like letting go.
You hurt me before.Never again.I won't give up and I sure as h*ll won't let you win!
My Poems and Stories at:http://www.quizilla.com/users/hiddeninsight/stuff/
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