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athos
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I need a critique on a design
« on: Nov 12th, 2003, 1:12am » |
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Let me know what you think...
I have just secured the domain www.xdup.com
There are other ideas of some 3D CH related images that I am working on... When I am in the middle of a CH I deffinately feel XdUP!!!!
I am in the process of trademarking it too... hope that protects it... I think that it is cool
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Re: I need a critique on a design
« Reply #1 on: Nov 12th, 2003, 1:15am » |
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Looks good to me. That is coming from someone who is artistically challenged. 
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Re: I need a critique on a design
« Reply #2 on: Nov 12th, 2003, 1:41am » |
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Define the value of X in any equation and plugin an image of the result of X behind the X to complete the image.
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Re: I need a critique on a design
« Reply #3 on: Nov 12th, 2003, 2:19am » |
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I think you are great, as usual.... I like it!
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Re: I need a critique on a design
« Reply #4 on: Nov 12th, 2003, 7:32am » |
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COOL!!! Think you might have a winner there, but I'm another artistically challenged individual. (challenged in a LOT of ways LOL)
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Re: I need a critique on a design
« Reply #5 on: Nov 13th, 2003, 3:09pm » |
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I want to do a line of t-shirst etc that say "X" _____ then fill in the blank
Thanks for the input
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Re: I need a critique on a design
« Reply #6 on: Nov 13th, 2003, 3:18pm » |
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Maybe you've got the next "hello, kitty" ... in Japan, there are thousands of hello kitty products - not just for kids. There is a vodka, and condoms. It's an all purpose brand.
Looks good, but if you want to tweak it, What about adding a little thickness to the upper right part of the x? Also, maybe straighten the upper left - lower right stroke somewhat?? You are obviously going for a 'raw' look on the X, but maybe it is a little too raw??
Good luck.
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Re: I need a critique on a design
« Reply #7 on: Nov 13th, 2003, 3:24pm » |
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I like the angle of it better on the middle right hand side ones, The red and blue ones.
Good Idea though
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Re: I need a critique on a design
« Reply #8 on: Nov 13th, 2003, 3:27pm » |
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Re: I need a critique on a design
« Reply #9 on: Nov 13th, 2003, 3:44pm » |
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Sorry - I did not see it, and the angle is right but I like the green one in the lower left hand corner as it over layes with the image below it. Sorry, but as you can see from my drawings, I really like the plays with depth and shadows, it draws the eye more, in my honest opinion.
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Re: I need a critique on a design
« Reply #10 on: Nov 13th, 2003, 3:51pm » |
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I like the one with the shadow of "up" under it. Cause it is clarifying the meaning.
I too have no artistic talent.... 
Great idea.
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Re: I need a critique on a design
« Reply #11 on: Nov 14th, 2003, 12:17pm » |
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I like it 
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Re: I need a critique on a design
« Reply #12 on: Nov 14th, 2003, 10:12pm » |
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I wanna T-shirt with OUCH on the front left...kinda small, and with the X "up arrow" across the back (big).
Make that 2...XL please!
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