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sandie99
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Painland (poem)
« on: Oct 16th, 2007, 1:22pm » |
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Painland
I can heal my heart
I can heal my soul
just someone take away this pain
so I can be myself again
here it comes again
I'm lost in the land of pain
I'm lost in the land of pain
my sky is getting darker
my pain is getting harder
I don't know if I can take it
I don't know how long I can hold on
I don't know if I will make it
I don't know if the sun will shine again
I'm tired, I don't know what to do next
Will I fail this test
I hate this uncertainty
I want to live peacefully
I just want to be me
whoever I might be
once this devil is done with me.
I wrote this poem last night, between hits.
PF days to us all,
Sanna
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Re: Painland (poem)
« Reply #1 on: Oct 16th, 2007, 1:30pm » |
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Re: Painland (poem)
« Reply #2 on: Oct 16th, 2007, 1:50pm » |
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Beautiful poem. Say's it all for me.
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Re: Painland (poem)
« Reply #3 on: Oct 16th, 2007, 2:27pm » |
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Sanna, A truly articulate and dark poem. Well done... phil h
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Re: Painland (poem)
« Reply #4 on: Oct 16th, 2007, 2:32pm » |
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Beautiful, but sad. 
Stay strong, sweetness. 
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Re: Painland (poem)
« Reply #6 on: Oct 17th, 2007, 3:31am » |
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Love You Sanna Girl...
That you use your pain for inspiration to write is incredible.
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Re: Painland (poem)
« Reply #7 on: Oct 17th, 2007, 3:37am » |
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Really says what we feel, you wrap the words around it very well! Hope this day brings happier thoughts to you Sanna.
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Re: Painland (poem)
« Reply #8 on: Oct 17th, 2007, 3:54am » |
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Thank you all so much.
on Oct 17th, 2007, 3:31am, sldrswyfe wrote:
That you use your pain for inspiration to write is incredible.
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Sherri, they do say that 'write about what you know' and unfourtunately ch is one of those things I know bit about. 
PF days to us all,
Sanna
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Re: Painland (poem)
« Reply #9 on: Oct 17th, 2007, 5:58am » |
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Sanna that cut right to the heart of the matter. Beautiful!!!!!!
You have a gift! Have you considered submitting your works to the OUCH newsletter?
with warm regards,
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Re: Painland (poem)
« Reply #10 on: Oct 17th, 2007, 6:05am » |
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I love it. You are very talented!
Em
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Re: Painland (poem)
« Reply #11 on: Oct 17th, 2007, 9:41am » |
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Ah! The foreigners put on such airs
Wearing the tangerine suits
And their harlequin eyes.
The pain they inspire
Draws in harmonica melodies
And the feathers of birds
Which flame up at their touch.
It all comes to light in the sheer
Debonair.
(Ellen)
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Re: Painland (poem)
« Reply #12 on: Oct 17th, 2007, 11:03am » |
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on Oct 17th, 2007, 3:31am, sldrswyfe wrote:Love You Sanna Girl...
That you use your pain for inspiration to write is incredible.
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Exactly my thoughts -- You are an inspiration. I pray for PF and inspiration!
Ray
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Re: Painland (poem)
« Reply #13 on: Oct 18th, 2007, 4:14am » |
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Thank you guys. Again.
on Oct 17th, 2007, 5:58am, artonio7 wrote:
You have a gift! Have you considered submitting your works to the OUCH newsletter?
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Actually, I haven't thought about that one. Maybe I should... If the newsletter team wants to use that one, feel free to do that.
PF days to us all,
Sanna
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"Do what you can and let God take care of the rest. Leave your heart wide open and always wish for the best" (Sanna Hillu)
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Re: Painland (poem)
« Reply #14 on: Oct 18th, 2007, 5:28am » |
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Sanna.
From the words of Bruce Almighty, that was B.E.A. Utiful. I'm a (former) English Comp major, and you're right, they always say, Write what you know. Wonderful poem.
Rane
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