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Play Day (poem)
« on: Jun 1st, 2007, 4:14pm » |
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What a day! Feels like a hunderd degrees!
But suddenly there's a noise in the distance.
Thunderstroms roll arcoss the mountain side.
Rain pours like tears of the broken hearted.
Then just as it started it's over with no sound.
Standing on the front porch I begin to smile.
I walk out down drive as drops run off the leaves.
Spin in the puddles, that are already warm.
Thore bangs his hammer still in the distant sky.
I just smile and continue to dance.
What a day. From hot and dry to wet and cool.
Thank god for the weather giving me a chance to play.
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Holding on his hand, when every second of everyday I feel like letting go.
You hurt me before.Never again.I won't give up and I sure as h*ll won't let you win!
My Poems and Stories at:http://www.quizilla.com/users/hiddeninsight/stuff/
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Re: Play Day (poem)
« Reply #1 on: Jun 1st, 2007, 4:39pm » |
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BRAVO 
Great stuff.... little Sis......Tim
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Re: Play Day (poem)
« Reply #2 on: Jun 1st, 2007, 9:04pm » |
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Very nice.
thank you for sharing
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Re: Play Day (poem)
« Reply #3 on: Jun 2nd, 2007, 7:38pm » |
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It's been raining all day and unfurtinatly it's not as nice as yesterday. Cold,wet, and almost no sunshine. Oh well! Glad you liked it.
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Holding on his hand, when every second of everyday I feel like letting go.
You hurt me before.Never again.I won't give up and I sure as h*ll won't let you win!
My Poems and Stories at:http://www.quizilla.com/users/hiddeninsight/stuff/
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Re: Play Day (poem)
« Reply #4 on: Jun 3rd, 2007, 9:35am » |
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I can just see you out there playing in the rain
thanks for the smile your poem gave me
love you
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