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Short and Sad but Kinda Sweet
« on: May 2nd, 2007, 4:18pm » |
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Why did I let you go when I still love you so much?
Why did you leave so willingly?
I love you!
Can't you see?
I miss you.
But you don't me.
My pain is everlasting.
My heart is always broke.
In my head it's a battle.
And when I try to breath, I choke.
No one can save me.
No one. Not even you.
Because when it comes down to it,
I'm done. It's through.
In the darkness, I'm safe and at ease.
In the darkness, I can do as I please.
In the darkness, going where no on dared.
In the darkness. That's where I'm scared.
Sorry my friends. Didn't mean them to sound so sad. Guess it's just one of those days.
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Holding on his hand, when every second of everyday I feel like letting go.
You hurt me before.Never again.I won't give up and I sure as h*ll won't let you win!
My Poems and Stories at:http://www.quizilla.com/users/hiddeninsight/stuff/
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Re: Short and Sad but Kinda Sweet
« Reply #1 on: May 2nd, 2007, 6:09pm » |
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"Be who you are and say what you feel...Because those that matter....don't mind....And those that mind....don't matter."
Man is what he believes. Anton Chekhov
Unless you believe, you will not understand.
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Re: Short and Sad but Kinda Sweet
« Reply #2 on: May 2nd, 2007, 6:13pm » |
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I wish i could write like that...
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Re: Short and Sad but Kinda Sweet
« Reply #3 on: May 2nd, 2007, 10:35pm » |
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Why did you let him/her go. Why wouldn't he/she leave so willingly?
Why should someone follow your heart and soul and not think about their own.
Why am I responding to this?? 
Have you ever felt happy? Lifes not all cake and roses, but it is what it is. Make the most of what is good and forget about what is not!
You'e young, honey. You have a lot of roads ahead of you. they all don't have to be the sad ones! 
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Re: Short and Sad but Kinda Sweet
« Reply #4 on: May 2nd, 2007, 11:21pm » |
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I know of what you write.....
hugs to you, Felicia!
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Re: Short and Sad but Kinda Sweet
« Reply #5 on: May 3rd, 2007, 3:37pm » |
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on May 2nd, 2007, 10:35pm, JeffB wrote:Why did you let him/her go. Why wouldn't he/she leave so willingly?
Why should someone follow your heart and soul and not think about their own.
Why am I responding to this??
Have you ever felt happy? Lifes not all cake and roses, but it is what it is. Make the most of what is good and forget about what is not!
You'e young, honey. You have a lot of roads ahead of you. they all don't have to be the sad ones! |
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Yes I have felt happy. I know that everything's not perfect and all about me. Thanks but I'm not one of those. My life has been full of happieness. I wasn't saying everything sucks and poor me. I was saying that I was having a bad day and needed an audiecne(sp?) that would listen. It was just a very dark day for me and I thought that I could make a simple post with out getting told I was messed up in the head and needed serious help or selfcentered. I'm not and I don't. Glad the rest of you liked them.
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Holding on his hand, when every second of everyday I feel like letting go.
You hurt me before.Never again.I won't give up and I sure as h*ll won't let you win!
My Poems and Stories at:http://www.quizilla.com/users/hiddeninsight/stuff/
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