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Broken
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In a Dream. The reality.
« on: Jan 20th, 2007, 3:20pm » |
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In a Dream. The reality.
I stand in a silent dream.
All by myself,except everyone else.
The ground is frozen black.
In this world all of my own.
You are there before me again.
And I breath a stale, cold air.
You expect the world of me.
I have only what is here for you.
I step towards you & you step away.
My heart stops as you fade away.
The blood is on my hands.
Tears fall as I stare at your broken body.
This dream. This place.
This...this...nightmare.
I wake in a cold sweat with the beast beside me.
A dream, a nightmare, this reality is worse.
To face a dream or the reality.
The beast is always there.
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Holding on his hand, when every second of everyday I feel like letting go.
You hurt me before.Never again.I won't give up and I sure as h*ll won't let you win!
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Re: In a Dream. The reality.
« Reply #1 on: Jan 20th, 2007, 3:47pm » |
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Thats uncomfortable Felicia.. what brought that on? Is everything okay?
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Re: In a Dream. The reality.
« Reply #2 on: Jan 20th, 2007, 4:09pm » |
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"Be who you are and say what you feel...Because those that matter....don't mind....And those that mind....don't matter."
Man is what he believes. Anton Chekhov
Unless you believe, you will not understand.
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Re: In a Dream. The reality.
« Reply #3 on: Jan 21st, 2007, 9:18am » |
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Dying From the Inside out
Heart peacefully but painfully broken.
Breathing but barely, I'm chokin'.
Dying from the inside out.
Scream in my head. Damn it! Don't shout!
Wrap my arms around my head.
God how I wish I was dead.
You laugh at me with a voice so loud.
I'm tripped over by the rushing crowd.
Wanting to cut the pain out.
Filling my weary mind with doubt.
The fear is to great, to strong.
In the ground is where I belong.
Heart peacefully but painfully broken.
Breathing but barely, I'm chokin'.
Dying from the inside out.
Scream in my head. Damn it!
I'm begging, please don't shout.
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Holding on his hand, when every second of everyday I feel like letting go.
You hurt me before.Never again.I won't give up and I sure as h*ll won't let you win!
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Re: In a Dream. The reality.
« Reply #4 on: Jan 21st, 2007, 12:59pm » |
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Big hugs, sweetie. 
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Re: In a Dream. The reality.
« Reply #5 on: Jan 21st, 2007, 7:36pm » |
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If I Were You
Imagin,
If you stood here with your bleeding heart open,
would I forcefully tear it out?
If you came to me with your head bleeding,
would I only drive in nails to make it hurt more?
If you showed me your weakness,
would I throw it to the wind & hurt you anyway?
And if you gave me the knife I put in your back,
would I only stab you again?
If you told me you trusted me more than anyone else,
would I laugh in your face & tell you you were stupid?
What would you do,were I in your place
& you standing in mine?
What would you expect of me?
What would you have me do, if I were you?
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Holding on his hand, when every second of everyday I feel like letting go.
You hurt me before.Never again.I won't give up and I sure as h*ll won't let you win!
My Poems and Stories at:http://www.quizilla.com/users/hiddeninsight/stuff/
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Re: In a Dream. The reality.
« Reply #7 on: Jan 22nd, 2007, 2:20am » |
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If I were you.
"You seem to find the dark when everything is bright
you look for all thats wrong instead of all thats right
does it feel good to you to rain on my parade
you never say a word unless its to complain
its driving me insane
If I were you
holding the world right in my hands
the first thing I'd do
is thank the stars for all that i have
If I were you
Look what surrounds you now
more than you ever dreamed
have you forgotten just how hard it used to be
so whats it going to take
for you to realize
it all could go away in one blink of an eye
it happens all the time
If I were you
holding the world right in my hands
the first thing I'd do
is thank the stars above
tell the world i love that I do
If I were you
So whats it going to take
for you to realize
it all could go away in one blink of an eye
it happens all the time
If I were you
holding the world right in my hands
the first thing I'd do
is thank the stars above
for the world I love
take a breath and enjoy the view
live the life that you have wanted to
If I were you. "
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Re: In a Dream. The reality.
« Reply #8 on: Jan 22nd, 2007, 2:34am » |
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Excellent poetry all round. Impressive ! Thanks all.
Annette
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Re: In a Dream. The reality.
« Reply #9 on: Jan 22nd, 2007, 3:32pm » |
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Nice work MJ. How long have you been writing? Little different than my own style but I like it.
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Holding on his hand, when every second of everyday I feel like letting go.
You hurt me before.Never again.I won't give up and I sure as h*ll won't let you win!
My Poems and Stories at:http://www.quizilla.com/users/hiddeninsight/stuff/
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Re: In a Dream. The reality.
« Reply #10 on: Jan 22nd, 2007, 3:52pm » |
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Re: In a Dream. The reality.
« Reply #11 on: Jan 22nd, 2007, 3:53pm » |
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Hi Broken
I like the poems, you put into words things that I have a difficult time putting into words and you remind me of how important it is to fight and try and be strong.
Your word strike deep, thanks for sharing them.
Matt
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Re: In a Dream. The reality.
« Reply #12 on: Jan 22nd, 2007, 4:12pm » |
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wow MJ that poem was so great it brought tears to my eyes!!! awesome work!
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