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I know it's been a while so...
« on: Dec 17th, 2006, 12:39pm » |
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Here's a bunch of poems for ya. No Christmas ones just yet but I'll see what I can do. Anyways.
The Jump & A Memory
I stand here, on the ledge.
Blankly looking down.
Stepping over the edge.
Plunging to the ground.
Suddenly I'm in your arms,
On a beach far, far away.
Breathing the sweet breeze.
Wishing here to forever stay.
Now you're gone.
And the ground's just ahead.
I feel the hit coming.
BAM! I'm dead.
You and I
You glance at me.
I glance at you.
And both of us turn away.
You love her.
I love you.
And our love is useless.
You walk on.
I watch you go.
And life is the same.
You glance at me.
I glance at you.
And both of us, turn away.
Broken Butterfly
Torn wings, on a wilted thing.
Rest on a flower, dying by the hour.
Caught in the rain. Feel life's pain.
A beatuiful but broken,
Butterfly.
Standing in the Court Yard
Standing in the court yard.
Staring at the sky.
Dancing in the rain.
Wishing I could fly.
Standing in the court yard.
Act as no one's there.
Sing right out loud.
Dreaming like I wouldn't dare.
Standing in the court yard.
Laying on the grass.
It finally stopped raining.
I watch the clouds pass.
Standing in the court yard.
Staring at the sky.
Dancing among the puddles.
Wishing I could fly.
Standing in the court yard.
A Goodmorning
Standing in the morning light.
Heaven surounds as you sleep.
Angels whisper and fairies sing.
Dancing across your small face.
Only for a moment, until you wake.
Eyes search until they meet mine, & smile.
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Holding on his hand, when every second of everyday I feel like letting go.
You hurt me before.Never again.I won't give up and I sure as h*ll won't let you win!
My Poems and Stories at:http://www.quizilla.com/users/hiddeninsight/stuff/
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Re: I know it's been a while so...
« Reply #1 on: Dec 17th, 2006, 8:05pm » |
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Anyone? They can't be that bad, can they? Please say something!
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Holding on his hand, when every second of everyday I feel like letting go.
You hurt me before.Never again.I won't give up and I sure as h*ll won't let you win!
My Poems and Stories at:http://www.quizilla.com/users/hiddeninsight/stuff/
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Re: I know it's been a while so...
« Reply #2 on: Dec 17th, 2006, 9:10pm » |
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Felicia, don't be sensitive. I'm tired. I'm tired and these are not my cup of tea, at the moment.
Sincerely, Charlotte
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« Reply #3 on: Dec 17th, 2006, 9:59pm » |
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Felicia,
They are very good! You express your feelings well. That after all is what art is all about ; You being able to put into words what other people may be feeling too.
Keep it up!
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Re: I know it's been a while so...
« Reply #4 on: Dec 18th, 2006, 6:44am » |
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I know they're a little different from some of my others but you know how it is. Pen meets paper and the words just come out. I'm glad you like them Kimberly. Sorry that they aren't what does it for you, Charlotte. I'll see if I can fnd something a little different for you. And I really wasn't being sensitve; silence for an artist is like putting a hyper active cheerleader in a room by herself with nothing to do. In other words, hell. Hope everyone likes them.
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Holding on his hand, when every second of everyday I feel like letting go.
You hurt me before.Never again.I won't give up and I sure as h*ll won't let you win!
My Poems and Stories at:http://www.quizilla.com/users/hiddeninsight/stuff/
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Re: I know it's been a while so...
« Reply #5 on: Dec 18th, 2006, 12:18pm » |
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I found them to be good but dark and depressing.
Matt
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Re: I know it's been a while so...
« Reply #6 on: Dec 18th, 2006, 3:04pm » |
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A Good Morning is my favorite, Felicia.
It reminds me of when the kids were little, and they still smiled at me when I woke them, LOL. I only get scowls and grunts now. 
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Re: I know it's been a while so...
« Reply #7 on: Dec 18th, 2006, 3:07pm » |
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I like "A Good Morning" too - made me smile
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Re: I know it's been a while so...
« Reply #8 on: Dec 18th, 2006, 3:48pm » |
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Now that I'm not tired, I like Standing in the Courtyard, and a good morning.
Sincerely, Charlotte
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Re: I know it's been a while so...
« Reply #9 on: Dec 18th, 2006, 4:15pm » |
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The funny thing is that I wrote "A Goodmorning" while watching my baby sister,Beth, sleep. Hellian by day but so sweet while she sleeps. April talks to much(either way ). "Standing in the Court Yard" was writen while hanging with my friend Barbie. She's very flakey and loves to play in the rain.  Matt, you're right: they are a bit dark. But that's just me, as you all know.  I was in a spot where the sky was black and life was a living hell and nothing was worth it any more. Much better now though. I'll see if I can whip some more up for ya real soon. Glad you all like 'em.
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You hurt me before.Never again.I won't give up and I sure as h*ll won't let you win!
My Poems and Stories at:http://www.quizilla.com/users/hiddeninsight/stuff/
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Re: I know it's been a while so...
« Reply #10 on: Dec 19th, 2006, 9:41am » |
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Here's that Christmas one I promised. Hope you like it.
Christmas Love
Snow slowly and softly falls.
With an angel's touch.
A sweet new born baby sleeps.
Surounded in heaven's light.
Behold one and all.
For it's Christmas night.
Lay down your head.
And dream of sweet things.
Listen to the angel's voices.
Dance as if on white wings.
Wake to a new fresh day.
Family is all around you.
Sing and dance in the usual way.
Raise your face to high above.
What is that you feel all around you?
It must be all the Christmas love.
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Holding on his hand, when every second of everyday I feel like letting go.
You hurt me before.Never again.I won't give up and I sure as h*ll won't let you win!
My Poems and Stories at:http://www.quizilla.com/users/hiddeninsight/stuff/
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Re: I know it's been a while so...
« Reply #11 on: Dec 19th, 2006, 10:10am » |
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Nice. Very nice. Very calming. Conjures up images of peacefulness and serenity. I like it.
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Re: I know it's been a while so...
« Reply #12 on: Dec 19th, 2006, 7:31pm » |
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Glad you like it, Brew. I was looking at the tree and all the presants under it and just got inspired.
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Holding on his hand, when every second of everyday I feel like letting go.
You hurt me before.Never again.I won't give up and I sure as h*ll won't let you win!
My Poems and Stories at:http://www.quizilla.com/users/hiddeninsight/stuff/
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Re: I know it's been a while so...
« Reply #13 on: Dec 20th, 2006, 3:34pm » |
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Another one.
I hate...
I hate this day.
It really sucks.
I hate this life.
That sucks too.
I hate my "friends".
They're really mean.
I hate my school.
It makes me scream.
I hate this feeling.
I don't want to be mad.
I hate this rhyme.
It's really sad.
I hate this day.
It really sucks.
I hate this life.
That sucks too.
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Holding on his hand, when every second of everyday I feel like letting go.
You hurt me before.Never again.I won't give up and I sure as h*ll won't let you win!
My Poems and Stories at:http://www.quizilla.com/users/hiddeninsight/stuff/
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Re: I know it's been a while so...
« Reply #14 on: Dec 20th, 2006, 5:28pm » |
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Oh, to posess the raging hormones of youth again.
You certainly move from one end of the spectrum to the other in a short amount of time. Take advantage of that, as long as you can keep your wits about you.
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