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Poem from Felicia
« on: Dec 1st, 2006, 5:15pm » |
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Christmas Eve Dancing
Across the snow, sweet fairies fly.
Not a single cloud in the sky.
Christmas eve is finally here.
Hold me close & don't let go,my dear.
High above reindeer prance.
And now it's time to dance.
Around,& around the beast I & go.
Falling ever faster toward the snow.
Pain like lightening on an ever clear night.
Little children stare in muracular fright.
Go now and rest your spinning head.
The pain is so strong, you wish you're dead.
Across the snow, sweet fairies fly.
Not a single cloud in the sky.
Christmas eve is finally here.
Hold me close & don't let go,my dear.
High above reindeer prance.
And now it's time to dance.
Always,
Felicia
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Re: Poem from Felicia
« Reply #1 on: Dec 1st, 2006, 6:50pm » |
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Hi Felicia,
That was real nice  . How are you sweetie?
Anymore poems for us?  Missed ya !
Annette
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Hi Felicia-
Nice powem and fitting for this time of year. 
Falling to the snow reminds me of a thought I once had about the abortive affects snow might have. I wonder if rolling in it in just a bathing suit would zap the beast.
Glad to hear from you.
-P.
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Re: Poem from Felicia
« Reply #3 on: Dec 1st, 2006, 10:07pm » |
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Quote: I wonder if rolling in it in just a bathing suit would zap the beast.
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THAT'S IT!!!!!!!!!! that image is now burned in my brain and I won't be sleeping for nights now. Paul, you and you alone, are now responsible for this insomnia not to mention the nausea.
Felicia, that was beautiful sweetie.
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Re: Poem from Felicia
« Reply #4 on: Dec 2nd, 2006, 1:16am » |
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on Dec 1st, 2006, 9:53pm, Paul98 wrote:Hi Felicia-
Nice powem and fitting for this time of year.
Falling to the snow reminds me of a thought I once had about the abortive affects snow might have. I wonder if rolling in it in just a bathing suit would zap the beast.
Glad to hear from you.
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I say go for it Paul, a spot of hypothermia might be the making of you! (S'cuse me everyone I'm going to be sic again)
Felicia I loved the change from the beginning of it to the beast, I wasn't expecting it at all.
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Re: Poem from Felicia
« Reply #5 on: Dec 2nd, 2006, 4:27am » |
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Felicia, you are going to get the usual response from me I'm afraid. I love what you can do with the language. I hate that you are so aware of things like " The pain is so strong ,you wish you were dead".
I'm kind of hoping that the quiet in here tonight means that most of us are not dealing with that particular emotion right now. I wish for you an old fashioned Christmas filled with love and friends, family and happiness.
Your words are beautiful and haunting so I hope that is the picture that you are trying to paint rather than the one you are stuck with.
I hope not to sound too condescending, but I am way out of practice speaking to people your age. Especially one's that pen like a grownup. Don't be in too much of a hurry, there is a lot of mystery and magic left for you to discover!
One day I will get a truly "light" piece of work out of you and I will rejoice to know that you see both sides of this world, the dark and the bright.
........................Tim
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Re: Poem from Felicia
« Reply #6 on: Dec 3rd, 2006, 11:03am » |
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Love your way with words. Saw why you left and think you should have stayed but not my place. Keep writing but for yourself, not for others. Great work as always.
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Re: Poem from Felicia
« Reply #7 on: Dec 3rd, 2006, 1:13pm » |
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Felicia...........you have a wonderful ......... extraordinary potenential for poetry skills........your poems are wonderful as always......someday go to a creative writing course (as I am planning to do so also...I am an aspiring poet and writer/photographer) to hone your skills then the sky will be the limit for you I really truly do believe.
Hugs honey, your heart truly shows in your poems and that's the basis of a famous poet IMO
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