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Black_Eyed_Girl
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In case you're wondering yes it's me. I just changed my name. The other one made me sound like I was 7(no offence Daddy). Anyways here they are.
You
Shady
Heartless and
Cold.
Loving
Tender
oir so I've been told.
You.
Love
Caring, daring, and sharing.
This is what you are to me.
Light, spinning, confusing.
This is what you make me feel.
Dark, trapped, and hollow.
This is what you pretend to be.
Love, is what you make me feel.
Always,
Felicia 
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Re: Poems. Yeah.
« Reply #1 on: Oct 19th, 2006, 4:38pm » |
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Well Felicia, them poems are very nice
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maffumatt
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Now you sound like someone gave you a shiner..........Nice poem though, keep up the good work
Matt
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Black_Eyed_Girl
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Thanks Matt I'm glad you like it soooo much!  I'm glad you like the poems though.
Always,
Felicia
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Re: Poems. Yeah.
« Reply #4 on: Oct 19th, 2006, 10:36pm » |
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jonny, you got a way with words mate. 
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Re: Poems. Yeah.
« Reply #5 on: Oct 20th, 2006, 8:16am » |
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Felicia I like those poems very much.
As you can see on this site I like to write down my thoughts, just as you do, and even when I'm fighting CH it helps me take my mind away from the pain.
I play the guitar (amateur, nothing special) and I love to make up my own songs.
Do I have your permission to steal a line or two every now and then from your poems?
PFDAN & kisses to you
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Black_Eyed_Girl
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I don't mind it at all, winshots. As for the many, whom I offened last night, I am sorry. It was a personal matter that should not have been made public on this bored. Again I am sorry. That's why I removed my post and asked the people who responded to do the same. For those of you that don't know what I'm talking about don't ask please. PF wishes!
Always,
Felicia
P.S. I'll try to get more poems up soon.
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Black_Eyed_Girl
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A couple of my favorites for ya.
Forever and for Always
Forever and for always,
I will love you.
Forever and for always,
I will care.
Forever and for always,
I can count on you.
Forever and for always,
I know you'll be there.
Forever and for always,
I will love you.
Love is Fire
Love is fire.
Wild & dancing free.
Once it touchs you,
it burns.
But still you long for it,
and still you yern.
Hot and passinate,
melting you from the inside.
But when its gone,
you feel as if they lied.
The pain is a reminder,
of what you've lost.
And you become determined,
to get it back, whatever the cost.
Because love is fire.
What do you think? Hope everyone likes them. PF wishes!
Always,
Felicia
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Re: Poems. Yeah.
« Reply #8 on: Oct 20th, 2006, 11:40pm » |
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on Oct 20th, 2006, 9:20pm, Black_Eyed_Girl wrote:
Forever and for Always
Forever and for always,
I will love you.
Forever and for always,
I will care.
Forever and for always,
I can count on you.
Forever and for always,
I know you'll be there.
Forever and for always,
I will love you.
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That one is my favorite, Felicia. I love it! Keep writing, sweetie... you do it so well.
(I agree with Matt... I thought you were a battered woman, LOL. You're referring to your eye color, or eyeliner, right?)
hugs and love, nani
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Re: Poems. Yeah.
« Reply #9 on: Oct 21st, 2006, 6:25am » |
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on Oct 20th, 2006, 9:20pm, Black_Eyed_Girl wrote:
Forever and for Always
Forever and for always,
I will love you.
Forever and for always,
I will care.
Forever and for always,
I can count on you.
Forever and for always,
I know you'll be there.
Forever and for always,
I will love you. |
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Felicia I love this poem. It makes me feel very comforted somehow and that all is right with the world.
Sitting here smiling 
love
Helen x
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Black_Eyed_Girl
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I stand here before you,
waiting for your answer.
You stand before me,
with a undecided mind.
We stand here,
facing our own worst fear.
And at the same time,
our best friend.
I'm scared to death,
of what you'll say.
I'm terrifide,that you
won't care either way.
You're confused,
& afraid you'll say it wrong.
I'm really worried,
because you're taking so long.
So I stand here before you,
waiting for your answer.
You stand before me,
with a undecided mind.
We stand here,
facing our own worst fear.
You all know what I mean.
Always,
Felicia
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maffumatt
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Felicia, this is the prettiest picture I have ever taken. Do you think you can put words to it? Take it as a challenge. It is the River Derwent in Matlock England. The oldest proven relative of mine is known to have originated from there.
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Black_Eyed_Girl
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Sorry hun but I can't see it right now. If I could I'd do it for ya in a heart beat. But tell me what you think of the latest one. I just made it up. I had some body ask me to show them how to do it and I'll tell you guys too just in case you're wondering. It's sorta like a thought that just comes to you all of a sudden and once you get thinking about the words, you put them together with others and everything just sorta fits. That's the best way I can explain it. Oh well! PF wishes!
Always,
Felicia
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Re: Poems. Yeah.
« Reply #14 on: Oct 22nd, 2006, 4:05am » |
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I love that last one Felicia, it sounds almost like a wedding (oh WHY didn't I say no?!) but I love it all the same, its very sweet and poignant and it reminds me of of first love.
Thank you for sharing, I really like it
Helen
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Black_Eyed_Girl
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Lets see if this fits for ya Matt.
Across the dark water,
falling leaves dance.
Among the red bloosms,
dragonflies prance.
On a shodowy bridge,
two lovers meet.
And watch the small deer,
dance on sighlent feet.
Staring at the dark water,
dreading to part.
A kiss goodbye,
that tears at their heart.
How's that work for ya? Hope you liked it.
Always,
Felicia
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maffumatt
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PERFECT!
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Re: Poems. Yeah.
« Reply #17 on: Oct 22nd, 2006, 11:03am » |
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I don't know about Matt Felicia but I love it. Makes me want to grab the kids and take a trip over to Matlock again just to look back at the river
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