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Daddys_Devil
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Well here's a buch that I think you guys will like. There's even one from a guy friend of mine. Everyone please tell me what you think.
Happy  :
Danceing by Firelight
The rain hums a lonly tune.
But here its warm & cozy in my room.
Firelight fickers & flames dance.
Stare in amazment;waiting for my chance.
Jumping up I scare the dog.
And even wake Dad, who's sawing logs.
Around & around me & my sisters twirl.
Even mom prances like a little girl.
Flopping down, out of air.
Laughing at my family's messy hair.
The rain hums a lonely tune.
But here its warm & cozy in my room.
Firelight fickers & flames dance.
Stare in amazment;glad to have had my chance.
Sad  :
The classic it's her or me
You looked at her
and fell in love.
Your heart took off,
on the wings of a dove.
Little did you know,
I felt the same for you.
And know you know,
but aren't sure what to do.
It's your choice.
I won't make up your mind.
Just remeber that,
your choice is timed.
I won't tell you
what is right.
Just let me know
before the end of the night.
So you choose,
it's me or her.
Rejection:
You Love me And I Don't
I thought I knew
what was real.
Now I don't understand,
how I feel.
You said you didn't
love me.
And for while,
it was this I could see.
But now you've confused me,
because you said you do.
Even you like me,
my feelings are through.
You say you love me
and I don't.
You say you want to be with me
but I won't.
From my guy friend:
Everything She Is
For all the stars in the sky,
that shine in her eyes,
she is beautiful.
For all the evil in the world,
that hunts her like prey,
she is pure.
For all the sunbeams,
that burn my eyes,
she is golden.
For all the fire,
that heats her soul,
she is amazing.
For all the hell,
that she's crossed,
she is perfect.
For all the pain,
she puts me through,
she is my savior.
For all the women I've met,
she is the one I love.
Always,
Felicia 
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Oh come on guys! Tell me what you think! I can't have left you that speechless! 
Always,
Felicia
edit: Guess I can. Whoops! 
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Is any one going to tell me what they think? Becky, Helen, Jonny, any one? Really would like to know what you think. Thanks.
Always,
Felicia
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Re: Bunch of Mixed Poems.
« Reply #3 on: Oct 5th, 2006, 9:14pm » |
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Sure.....STFU!!!!
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 Grr!
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Felicia
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Re: Bunch of Mixed Poems.
« Reply #5 on: Oct 6th, 2006, 8:01am » |
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well that was kinda shitty of someone. good job felicia. keep at it and they wil lget even better but good job.
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Re: Bunch of Mixed Poems.
« Reply #6 on: Oct 6th, 2006, 12:47pm » |
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Thank you Barak. I'm glad somebody liked them.
Always,
Felicia
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Felicia, thanks for sharing your talent.
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Re: Bunch of Mixed Poems.
« Reply #8 on: Oct 6th, 2006, 3:21pm » |
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Hi Felicia, I was down in Kent yesterday so I was only on in the morning.
The first one reminds me of Christmas, I know it isn't "Christmassy" but perhaps its the wintery feel. Its an almost Dickensian picture that it conjures.
The second, I can't relate to because I've never given anyone the choice! If they aren't sure I make the decision and move on and thats that.
The third reminds me of a song by the Beautiful South which I love called "I need a little time" Its nothing like it but the sentiment is the same. I'll look up the words and im them to you, I think you'll like it.
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Thank you to the few that did reply. I'm glad you liked them. Helen, I got the words and it sounds like a beautiful song. I won't bother you with any more poems or by asking for your thoughts. PF wishes.
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Felicia
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Re: Bunch of Mixed Poems.
« Reply #10 on: Oct 7th, 2006, 2:07pm » |
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on Oct 7th, 2006, 2:01pm, Daddys_Devil wrote:I won't bother you with any more poems or by asking for your thoughts.
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Stop it, Kid.....youve been here long enough to know I was just playing with you!
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Re: Bunch of Mixed Poems.
« Reply #11 on: Oct 7th, 2006, 2:22pm » |
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Quote:Oh come on guys! Tell me what you think! I can't have left you that speechless!
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Did too!  
I look forward to future poems,just as I look forward to Vigs photos. I dont always post on those either,some just like to read.
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Re: Bunch of Mixed Poems.
« Reply #12 on: Oct 7th, 2006, 3:00pm » |
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I'm reading this again, and thinking to myself....should this young lady be left feeling this way we should all have our asses kicked.
click post dummy
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Re: Bunch of Mixed Poems.
« Reply #13 on: Oct 7th, 2006, 3:18pm » |
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Felicia I'm upset that you're upset. I think the world of you as I hope you know and I truly do love your poems. I think you know me well enough to know I'd say if I didn't!
If you stop posting poems it will be our loss, I don't like loosing ANYTHING so please continue. In return I do promise I'll always tell you what I think.
You make this place sparkle and I hate seeing your light dimmed hon.
I'd love to see one from you on the subject of Veterans though if you ever want suggestions for a topic
love you lots hon
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Re: Bunch of Mixed Poems.
« Reply #14 on: Oct 7th, 2006, 6:29pm » |
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on Oct 7th, 2006, 2:07pm, Jonny wrote:
Stop it, Kid.....youve been here long enough to know I was just playing with you!
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I know Jonny. I'm just getting a little sick of all the shit on here. People are more worried about fighting about stupid shit than replying to something of real meaning. JB you're not a dummy. It wasn't you so don't worry about it. Helen, thank you. I don't blame you for the way others acted. I'm glad you think so much of my silly words and ryhmes.
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Felicia
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« Reply #15 on: Oct 7th, 2006, 6:38pm » |
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I always read and enjoy your poems Felicia, your wise beyond your years.
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Re: Bunch of Mixed Poems.
« Reply #16 on: Oct 7th, 2006, 7:50pm » |
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Hey Felicia,
There are many of us who read your poems and think a lot of them. I'd miss them if you decided to stop.
We may not always post, but we're always here--and we're always watching.
Keep up your work--if there's any salvation possible in this strange, screwy world it'll come from words, from music, and from art--from passion and belief, not from the dead seriousness of the practical. Writing is part of the solution, a way of solving the riddle of who we are, where we are going, and where we ought to go.
As for people fighting about stupid sh#t--hey, people have ALWAYS fought about stupid sh#t. That's because they're people and not ethereal beings. Can't see it changing anytime soon. It's really not a big deal until we start heaving actual rocks at each other. Don't take it to heart, okay?
There's an enormous, powerful, splendid world of things and experience sparkling all around--so tell us about it all through the singular lens of your words--only you can speak the things you have to say. Remember. Transform them. Tell them.
I live with a young writer as well, and I know that there's nothing a writer dislikes more than silence. Writing is not just a solitary occupation--but a conversation. How can a conversation take place if you choose to stop posting things?
Keep it up.
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George
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Ah! The foreigners put on such airs
Wearing the tangerine suits
And their harlequin eyes.
The pain they inspire
Draws in harmonica melodies
And the feathers of birds
Which flame up at their touch.
It all comes to light in the sheer
Debonair.
(Ellen)
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Re: Bunch of Mixed Poems.
« Reply #17 on: Oct 7th, 2006, 9:50pm » |
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Hello Felicia,
Heres a hug from a poet to another 
The fight of the night
In the midst of the night
I woke up
A sense of fright ...
Someone
Something
Came knocking
Pushing for yet another fight
I got up and went outside
The sky was dark and the moon was pale
The stars faded
As the shadow came looming ... rising ...
Before I knew it
The war has begun.
Annette
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Re: Bunch of Mixed Poems.
« Reply #18 on: Oct 7th, 2006, 10:17pm » |
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And this is one in reply to one of your poems
I Love You and You Dont
I thought you knew
That it is real
You may not always understand
How I feel
When I said
I indeed
love you
For a while
You may not see
I may have confused thee
When I said I do
without saying a word
I thought you knew
That it is real
Love sometimes
Doesnt even need
to be spoken.
Annette
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« Reply #19 on: Oct 8th, 2006, 9:40pm » |
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I like 'em a lot there BB. They're really good. How long have you been writing? George you're right. Silence is hell for a poet because usually it makes them think its horrable. When I show a poem to my friends or any of you here it makes me feel exposed because that's part of me. So when no one replies it makes me feel like I've left a weak spot that can be used as a target. I;m glad you guys like them. Maybe when I get around to it I will put some more on. But not right now. Now its time for bed. I'm beat. I got to meet Paul98 today and had a lot of fun. Hopefull he'll be able to get some of the pics up soon(hint hint Paul ). Night all!
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Felicia
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Re: Bunch of Mixed Poems.
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on Oct 8th, 2006, 9:40pm, Daddys_Devil wrote:I like 'em a lot there BB. They're really good. How long have you been writing? George you're right. Silence is hell for a poet because usually it makes them think its horrable. When I show a poem to my friends or any of you here it makes me feel exposed because that's part of me. So when no one replies it makes me feel like I've left a weak spot that can be used as a target. I;m glad you guys like them. Maybe when I get around to it I will put some more on. But not right now. Now its time for bed. I'm beat. I got to meet Paul98 today and had a lot of fun. Hopefull he'll be able to get some of the pics up soon(hint hint Paul ). Night all!
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I'm working on it Sparky. As soon as I get time to upload them I will.
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Re: Bunch of Mixed Poems.
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I'm working on it Sparky. As soon as I get time to upload them I will.
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Sheesh you just can't get the staff  Get on the job buggerlugs!
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Re: Bunch of Mixed Poems.
« Reply #22 on: Oct 9th, 2006, 5:02pm » |
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on Oct 9th, 2006, 7:35am, LeLimey wrote:
Sometimes, Helen, I swear to God you invent half these words.
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Re: Bunch of Mixed Poems.
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huh! flippin' cheek! You ask Yorky if buggerlugs is a proper word (and you look at Paul and tell me you can't see my point!)Of course, gormless git, fannyferknackerpants, steamin' great wassock and big girls blouse WOULD have all been equally applicable
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