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Tiannia
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Dark Side of me - A poem - Fitting it seems
« on: Oct 5th, 2006, 12:39pm » |
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there's a dark side of me
i can't let you see
a side that's hateful and scorns
there's a dark side of me
i won't let be free
a side that's tattered and torn
there's a dark side of me
raging in silence
screaming in terror
afraid of the violence
emotions must, at all costs
be kept inside, or i'll be lost
feelings stay hidden
and memories past
i'm afraid to show you
i cannot last
there's a dark side of me
that rages inside
violence, anger and suicide
the dark side of me
always alone
the dark side of me
i'm learning to own
Wrote a little while ago when things where very difficult with my marriage, the beast rearing his head again and I was afraid my meds where not working again, well everything was just getting to be a bit much.
It is amazing how much it htelps to express yourself even if no one else sees it or hears it at the time. Just so that you can get it out of your head and maybe see a path that you where blinded to before.
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Re: Dark Side of me - A poem
« Reply #1 on: Oct 5th, 2006, 1:04pm » |
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That is incredible!
Perfectly worded and straight to the heart.
Feels like it was written for me!
I know it wasn't but thanks for sharing it .
Mike
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Tiannia
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Re: Dark Side of me - A poem
« Reply #2 on: Oct 5th, 2006, 1:14pm » |
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I had not looked at it for about 3 minths now. And when I read it again, well it seemed that people here would relate, all in thier own way.
/huggs Mike
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Re: Dark Side of me - A poem
« Reply #3 on: Oct 5th, 2006, 1:25pm » |
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Very nice, T.
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Re: Dark Side of me - A poem
« Reply #4 on: Oct 9th, 2006, 5:10pm » |
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Thank you hun.
This is rather a sad piece concerding the tone on the boards today.
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Re: Dark Side of me - A poem
« Reply #5 on: Oct 9th, 2006, 5:24pm » |
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on Oct 5th, 2006, 1:04pm, Ghost wrote:Feels like it was written for me!
I know it wasn't but thanks for sharing it . |
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That's the thing about well-written poetry - it feels like it's about ME, not just about SOMEBODY ELSE.
Very well done, Tia.
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Re: Dark Side of me - A poem - Fitting it seems
« Reply #6 on: Oct 9th, 2006, 10:33pm » |
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WOW!
Much Love,
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Re: Dark Side of me - A poem - Fitting it seems
« Reply #7 on: Oct 12th, 2006, 12:11pm » |
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/hugs
Thank you Shari
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