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Daddys_Devil
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Wrote this last night but didn't have time to post. Hope everyone likes it.
Dancing to no Music
Eyes on fire.
Time to rock.
Pacing the floor.
Watching the clock.
I'm scared to death.
'Cause the pain won't leave.
Ready to end it.
Someone shoot me please.
Without music,
the dance goes on.
Wanting to disapear.
Wishing the pain gone.
You shout.
I want to scream.
Try to get to the place.
The place in between.
Eyes on fire.
Time to rock.
Pacing the floor.
Watching the clock.
Always,
Felicia 
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Re: Dancing to no Music. Newest Poem
« Reply #1 on: Aug 19th, 2006, 4:43pm » |
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as always right on target
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Re: Dancing to no Music. Newest Poem
« Reply #2 on: Aug 19th, 2006, 4:56pm » |
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WOW!!!!
That hit home, Kid!
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Re: Dancing to no Music. Newest Poem
« Reply #3 on: Aug 19th, 2006, 5:13pm » |
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All too familiar Chills Felicia.
Thank you you are dead on.
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Re: Dancing to no Music. Newest Poem
« Reply #4 on: Aug 19th, 2006, 9:40pm » |
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on Aug 19th, 2006, 11:18am, Daddys_Devil wrote:
Try to get to the place.
The place in between.
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Felicia, those two lines were like icewater thrown over me. I've never found the "place in between", despite trying to find it for a very long time.
Nice job.
Best,
George
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Ah! The foreigners put on such airs
Wearing the tangerine suits
And their harlequin eyes.
The pain they inspire
Draws in harmonica melodies
And the feathers of birds
Which flame up at their touch.
It all comes to light in the sheer
Debonair.
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Re: Dancing to no Music. Newest Poem
« Reply #5 on: Aug 19th, 2006, 10:15pm » |
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Real nice Felicia, real nice!
-P.
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Re: Dancing to no Music. Newest Poem
« Reply #6 on: Aug 20th, 2006, 3:10am » |
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I want to put music to that!!!
I AM SERIOUS!!!
This is a depth you should not know. God bless you Felicia. 
Peace,
Carl D
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Re: Dancing to no Music. Newest Poem
« Reply #7 on: Aug 20th, 2006, 10:24am » |
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Thanks guys. Glad you liked it.
George, I know exactly what you mean. I've been trying to get there all my life. It seems I've been fighting everything my whole life. And everytime I get a little bit closer, it moves farther away.  Mom asked why I was hidding out in the rain once. I told her it was nothing but after she left I said (to myself) that I was trying to get away from her, from my sister, or from what ever it is that I'm running from. I hope to find out what that is soon.
Carl, if you can do it, have at. I'd like to hear it when you get it finished. And as for knowing it at this depth at this age, well, I guess that it all depends on who you're talking to. If I meet everyone some day, you'll think a little differently. Let's just say I'm not your ordinary 14 year old girl. As some of you may have noticed. 
How's about another one. This one doesn't deal with the pain of CH. But of a forbiden love. And I know that all of us has felt that at least once or twice before. This one's called Black Love.
When I see you, my broken heart
beats just a little bit faster.
You're the reason,
that I live for tomorrow.
Like a blade,your eyes,
they cut straight to my soul.
One day, I'll steal
your hard heart.
Just as you
took mine.
Broken and brused,
together we'll be.
I'm trapped here.
Trapped in a black, forbiden love.
Always,
Felicia
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Re: Dancing to no Music. Newest Poem
« Reply #8 on: Aug 20th, 2006, 11:37am » |
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I love the new poem. Sometimes the love is not forbidden, just crippled.
I'd like to hear Carl put it to music, too.
My youngest is 17. I was still having kids when my friends & siblings were having grandkids. My daughter Cathy is protective, also.
For those of us who had wondered, this is the pain of a supporter.
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Re: Dancing to no Music. Newest Poem
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<>Felecia<>That was awesome.... You are well beyond your years... Your poetry is a window to your soul... keep up the good work... Poetry has been therapy for me in the hardest fases of my life~~~ Write on young friend.... love ree <><
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Re: Dancing to no Music. Newest Poem
« Reply #10 on: Aug 20th, 2006, 1:49pm » |
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Wow. Awesome work, kiddo.
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Re: Dancing to no Music. Newest Poem
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on Aug 20th, 2006, 10:24am, Daddys_Devil wrote:
Carl, if you can do it, have at. I'd like to hear it when you get it finished. And as for knowing it at this depth at this age, well, I guess that it all depends on who you're talking to. If I meet everyone some day, you'll think a little differently. Let's just say I'm not your ordinary 14 year old girl. As some of you may have noticed.
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Thanks Felicia. When it is recorded, it will be posted. It may take a few days to complete, but I will post it when mixed down.
Carl D
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Re: Dancing to no Music. Newest Poem
« Reply #12 on: Aug 21st, 2006, 4:55pm » |
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nice writing
this one goes up on my poem board
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Re: Dancing to no Music. Newest Poem
« Reply #13 on: Aug 21st, 2006, 4:57pm » |
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That was truly great ! Wonderful Job !
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Re: Dancing to no Music. Newest Poem
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Never a more direct hit.....
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Re: Dancing to no Music. Newest Poem
« Reply #15 on: Aug 21st, 2006, 5:34pm » |
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WOW!!!!!
You have a beautiful gift.....keep it up!
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Re: Dancing to no Music. Newest Poem
« Reply #16 on: Aug 21st, 2006, 7:07pm » |
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Gald everyone liked them. I've been in a writing mood lately. I'll keep 'em coming as fast as I can. Thanks for all the comments.
Always,
Felicia
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