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thomas
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Abandoned by Chris Lee
« on: May 19th, 2006, 9:22pm » |
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My 14 year old son Chris wrote this, I really like it. I hope you do to.
Abandoned
In the black-eyed fever
Of the jagged night,
Spurned by the moon,
Stabbed by the light,
Too twisted to think,
Too ragged to sleep,
I lie broken in half,
Unable to mend myself;
In the dead vacuum,
I feel much betrayed,
I feel quite frail,
I make vain excuses,
I rail against life,
But all to no avail;
In the razor dark,
Flopping in anguish
On my stinking bed,
Only one small fact
Sits
Crystal clear:
In my moment of fear,
In my moment of pain,
When I needed it most,
Hope let me down--
Just like a soft slimy slug,
It slithered out of my sight.
This You May Not Know But This Is How I Feel When Your Eyes Meet Mine.
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Re: Abandoned by Chris Lee
« Reply #1 on: May 20th, 2006, 2:37am » |
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awwwwwwwwwwwwww
give him a hug for me G!
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Re: Abandoned by Chris Lee
« Reply #2 on: May 20th, 2006, 2:44am » |
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Great stuff! He has the talent, very deep, very good.
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Re: Abandoned by Chris Lee
« Reply #3 on: May 20th, 2006, 2:50am » |
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Loved it!
Thank you for sharing it. 
Sanna
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Re: Abandoned by Chris Lee
« Reply #4 on: May 20th, 2006, 11:56am » |
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That's powerful...I have a 14 year old.
Wow
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Re: Abandoned by Chris Lee
« Reply #5 on: May 20th, 2006, 12:05pm » |
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Wow.....just....wow 
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Re: Abandoned by Chris Lee
« Reply #6 on: May 20th, 2006, 12:25pm » |
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Yep....very deep.
Very raw.
Very nicely done.
Thank you.
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