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sandie99
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What do you think...
« on: Apr 2nd, 2006, 11:22am » |
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... about these lyrics I wrote yesterday while I was waiting for a hit to go away?
Never mind my errors... 
OUT OF MY HANDS
Maybe one of these days
I will stop crying
Maybe one of these days
I will stop dying inside
every time
words will hit me like a rock
There's too much life
I can't control
Chorus:
It's out of my hands now
I'll surrender
I'll give it all to Him
lead me home
I've been trying so hard
to be somebody they could be proud of
I didn't realize that all those lies I told myself
were just self defence
I was scared of life itself
now I can't pretend
I try to stand on my own two feet
and pray that one day I'll be blessed
Chorus
I've done my share of mistakes
I've got my share of regrets
and there are plenty of wrong turns
I haven't taken yet
But I get stronger by every day I face
there are many lessons I've learned
but I'm not taking the blame
Chorus
When the Judgement Day comes
I hope I've done more things right
I hope I've shared enough of love
and picked the right side in every fight
I'm far from perfect
but God made me this way
there must be a reason
why I'm alive today
Chorus
I'll pray that you'll be blessed in the end
I'll pray that you'll be blessed
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Re: What do you think...
« Reply #1 on: Apr 2nd, 2006, 11:42am » |
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Re: What do you think...
« Reply #2 on: Apr 2nd, 2006, 11:43am » |
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Sandie---It was very very good !!!
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Re: What do you think...
« Reply #3 on: Apr 2nd, 2006, 1:57pm » |
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Very nice, Sandie. There's some talent there - good for you!
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Re: What do you think...
« Reply #4 on: Apr 2nd, 2006, 2:03pm » |
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I give it a 9... the content was good and you can dance to it! 
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Re: What do you think...
« Reply #5 on: Apr 2nd, 2006, 3:53pm » |
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Re: What do you think...
« Reply #6 on: Apr 2nd, 2006, 5:00pm » |
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Nice,
How could you know if you could dance to it without the music? What if it is acapella?
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Re: What do you think...
« Reply #7 on: Apr 3rd, 2006, 10:08am » |
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I really liked it Sandie and Crys printed it out for her project.
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Re: What do you think...
« Reply #8 on: Apr 3rd, 2006, 10:56am » |
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Sanna...it's GREAT! I really, really, like it. 
great job! hugs, nani
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Re: What do you think...
« Reply #9 on: Apr 3rd, 2006, 3:38pm » |
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Sanna,
I like the lyrics a lot!! Do you have a "tune" to it in your head? If not - want me to put it to music? I don't have a LOT of experience with songwriting, but I have composed lots of music over time for my music degree and other things. I love to do melodies and stuff like that, but I totally suck at writing lyrics.
So how bout you write the lyrics and I'll write the music? hehehe
Do you hear it going fast or slow? Major or minor? You'll have to let me know if you have your own tune you hear it fitting to.
Very nice!!
Hugz,
Carrie 
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Re: What do you think...
« Reply #10 on: Apr 3rd, 2006, 8:40pm » |
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Sandie
I thought it was wonderful you are very talented keep it up. Thanks for sharing it..Kim
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Re: What do you think...
« Reply #11 on: Apr 4th, 2006, 11:03am » |
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Thank you all for feedback.
on Apr 3rd, 2006, 3:38pm, Lizzie2 wrote:Do you have a "tune" to it in your head? If not - want me to put it to music?
So how bout you write the lyrics and I'll write the music? hehehe
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Carrie,
usually when I write lyrics I indeed hear a tune for them, too. But with this one... no tune whatsoever, which is new for me.
I'd love to hear this one as a proper song, so it would be wonderful if you could compose the melody for it. What you had in mind?
I'll do the lyrics, you write the music... sounds good to me! Charts, here we come!
Best wishes,
Sanna
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Re: What do you think...
« Reply #12 on: Apr 4th, 2006, 11:16am » |
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such talent thats great Sanna .Carrie I read this yesterday w/no time to reply.I was sure that with all the talented musicians on this board we'd have a beautiful song in no time.
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