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Poem by Felicia (BJ's 14 year old )
« on: Feb 8th, 2006, 10:11pm » |
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In the Dark
I sit in the dark.
As it creeps ever closer.
The pain's not bad...yet.
But its growing stronger,stronger
By the slowing second.
Dripping posion.
Rotting through my brain.
Pushing down my tears,
Pushing down my pain,
I live through day to day.
Trying to stay sain.
The pain is greater now.
Pounding like a hammer.
Even the smallest sound,
comes out as a scream.
My head is wheeling,there's nothing for the pain.
Screaming in my head.
It wouldn't even help if I was dead.
Finally its all over.
Slowly it creeps away.
I sit in the dark,
Waiting for the pain.
Waiting until it comes another day
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I hate to know that a child can know and understand how all this feels
PS sorry it took me so long to post this for you, as always it is a great poem.[center][/center]
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Re: Poem by Felicia (BJ's 14 year old )
« Reply #1 on: Feb 9th, 2006, 2:49pm » |
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I'm sorry you hurt, Felicia. You are a remarkable writer, you know. Your poem gave me goose-bumps and I have to say, I got pretty choked up. God gave you a gift and I'm glad to see you use it. I would be thrilled if I could publish this poem, sweetie. Let me know if it's OK. Hang in there honey.
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Re: Poem by Felicia (BJ's 14 year old )
« Reply #2 on: Feb 9th, 2006, 6:34pm » |
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wow!
i'm speeCHless
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Re: Poem by Felicia (BJ's 14 year old )
« Reply #3 on: Feb 9th, 2006, 6:40pm » |
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Nicely written!!!
Thank you!
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Re: Poem by Felicia (BJ's 14 year old )
« Reply #4 on: Feb 9th, 2006, 7:00pm » |
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on Feb 9th, 2006, 6:34pm, vig wrote:wow!
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exactly.
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Re: Poem by Felicia (BJ's 14 year old )
« Reply #5 on: Feb 9th, 2006, 7:58pm » |
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so true.
so true
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Re: Poem by Felicia (BJ's 14 year old )
« Reply #6 on: Feb 9th, 2006, 11:27pm » |
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Now that's what used to be called "nifty." 
Hope you're doing better soon.
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Re: Poem by Felicia (BJ's 14 year old )
« Reply #7 on: Feb 10th, 2006, 9:26am » |
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I'm amazed. Felicia really gets it... Thank you for sharing this poem with all of us, Bec! 
Here's my favourite part:
Quote:Pushing down my tears,
Pushing down my pain,
I live through day to day.
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Re: Poem by Felicia (BJ's 14 year old )
« Reply #8 on: Feb 10th, 2006, 11:45am » |
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Not only is Felicia a talented writer but you should see her art work.I may be prejudiced but I know talent when I see it and she is definatley talented.Watch out because if she wants I beleive we all wll be seeing more writing and atrwork from Felicia.I believe she easily could write and illistrate a best selling book.Keep it up Felicia with poems like this maybe people will start to understand..
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Re: Poem by Felicia (BJ's 14 year old )
« Reply #9 on: Feb 10th, 2006, 9:34pm » |
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Felicia,
Your poem is astounding! Like every excellent poet, your words bring out strong emotions in the reader. Keep up the excellent work, Felicia! You have an obvious talent.
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Re: Poem by Felicia (BJ's 14 year old )
« Reply #10 on: Feb 10th, 2006, 11:08pm » |
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Thank you for putting that into words. I never thought of anything related to the monster could be beautiful,
but this....
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Re: Poem by Felicia (BJ's 14 year old )
« Reply #11 on: Feb 11th, 2006, 12:09am » |
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Felicia-
Many thanks for the wonderfully written poem. I don't believe I've ever seen it expressed more vividly, more exactly or more beautifully all at the same time. Thank you for shedding a bit of light upon the demon that has brought so many of us darkness for so long. Much love to you my dear and THANK YOU! 
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