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jokrs2
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Clusterworld
« on: Mar 21st, 2005, 12:46am » |
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CLUSTERWORLD It starts in the distance and then it draws near; At first just a cloud, it’s the storm that I fear. The cloud it grows bigger, the lightning it flashes; Where once there was sanity, it now quickly dashes. This huge pain in my head forces me out of bed; Pacing in circles, and yelling, pounding my head. How long will this last, it’s the length that I dread; It’s the demon, that’s right, and it’s just getting started. Pain so severe and the depression I’ve had; What could I have done to be treated so bad. My head, it is screaming, just give me a gun; It’s the beast’s party and it’s surely no fun. I found this web site, it’s a place I can go; There are people in here, there are people who know. What it’s like to dance, to dance with the beast; Forced to have dinner and be part of his feast. But there’s also hope here, and info it’s true; They can help you laugh when you’re feeling blue. So hey, stick around now, you’re not alone; The clusterhead site, this place we call home. Copyright. Joe Carroll 2005
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Re: Clusterworld
« Reply #1 on: Mar 21st, 2005, 12:56am » |
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Very nice Joe. Thanks for posting it.
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Re: Clusterworld
« Reply #2 on: Mar 21st, 2005, 1:12am » |
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Excellent job Joe! Two thumbs up.
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Re: Clusterworld
« Reply #3 on: Mar 21st, 2005, 1:15am » |
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Nice, Joe.
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Re: Clusterworld
« Reply #4 on: Mar 21st, 2005, 5:27am » |
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Sounds familiar... Good poem, Joe!
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jokrs2
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Re: Clusterworld
« Reply #5 on: Mar 21st, 2005, 6:09pm » |
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Thanks for the kind words. I've decided to go ahead and write a musical score to go with it as I play a ginormous multi-keyboard, multi-synthesizer w/midi & Cakewalk set-up. Hopefully the Kudzu will keep on doing a good job, otherwise I don't even feel like playing...you know how it goes. PFD&N's to everyone. Joe
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Re: Clusterworld
« Reply #6 on: Mar 23rd, 2005, 9:01am » |
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Wonderfully true poem. Been feeling just like the begining of the poem last few days.
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