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Jonny
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on Aug 5th, 2004, 2:52pm, Jeepgun wrote:Like Rapunzel, I implore thee,
"Let down thy hair!" |
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I aint letting down my hair for your ass....Homo! 
Take the fucking stairs.......LMAO
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Kevin_M
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Re: From The Garden
« Reply #1 on: Aug 5th, 2004, 6:27pm » |
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Quote:Bound and smothered in gray-brown gowns
of stiff, scratchy lace, shrug them off!
For what richer raiment can there be, than
the sky, the wind, and the fragrance of flowers?
Rip the laces of the confining bodice so that you may
stretch wide your arms as you whirl into the sun!
Pin up your skirts as pantaloons, so you may
leap, run, tumble, and dance and dance and dance!
Kick off those narrow shoes that bind and pinch!
Sweep the pins from your lustrous hair and shake |
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Refining that "get her out of her clothes" rap, aren't you Frank. I like hair first, wait on the heels.
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Kevin_M
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Re: From The Garden
« Reply #3 on: Aug 5th, 2004, 8:04pm » |
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on Aug 5th, 2004, 7:28pm, Jeepgun wrote:
Now this one is a bit abstract for me Frank but good flow, rhythm and punctuation use. Ya gotta read in between the dots and what's not said I guess. Of what period is this style?
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Jeepgun
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It's from the "fuck it, I quit" period/style. Like it?
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Re: From The Garden
« Reply #5 on: Aug 6th, 2004, 8:54am » |
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Beautiful, Frank...
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Re: From The Garden
« Reply #6 on: Aug 6th, 2004, 9:05am » |
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on Aug 6th, 2004, 7:48am, Jeepgun wrote:
Without the imagery, it raised a certain interpretive curiousity. Subtle, but less expressive, I understand now Frank.
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Jeepgun
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A new composition. I worked really hard on this one, too. Ready?
The cat
Shat
In the hat
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